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Sex, lust and oil !

11/13/2012

(this story was taken from our blog post 13th nov 2012)


A couple of weeks ago our kinky side got to show itself. It’s taken this long to find the time to write about it
but that would be because I have a life and don’t spend
all my free time on AdultFriendFinder and writing about everything we do…!
Anyway, this time our kinky side manifested itself as PVC
and baby oil, I figured it was worth a bit of time because
we really had a good time… It wasn’t a spontaneous thing. We had talked about it
for a week or two. If we are honest about it, we would do it more often but it’s
a lot of work. Getting stuff out, clearing and cleaning afterwards,
very messy! But fun. As it is we treat ourselves every few months. Basically it involves laying down a large PVC sheet on the
bed, a bottle of baby oil and a lot of sex.. Hummm, so nice..



Ellen loves anything wet and slippery on her body, Showers,
jacuzzis, swimming pools etc. And of course hot cum Anyway, when we get it on with the baby oil she squirts like
crazy, it’s a combination of stimulation, oil and hard
fucking that makes her really horny, and the PVC sheet means
she can totally let go and squirt as much as she can without
ruining our bed. Fantastic. We started out with Ellen laying tummy down on the PVC across
the bed rather than along the length of it. I drenched my
hands in oil, rubbed it in to warm it a little and began to
massage it over her back. Starting with the shoulders and
upper back, then the middle and down to her hips, by the time
I got there I was getting bored and I was practically pouring
oil straight out of the bottle onto her. I should really have put the bottle in a bowl of hot water
first. I usually do, but I forgot. The oil was cold and she
was squirming as it touched her skin. I did my best to break
the impact by pouring it over the back of my hand as I massaged
her with my palm and that felt kinda nice. Once I got a coating
over her I just began pouring it on again, it’s so much
more fun to liberally squirt streams of the clear slippery
liquid over her bum cheeks and hips and watch it roll off
her curves. Her skin was beginning to glisten all over. I was so tempted
to pour it between her ass cheeks and rub it into her crack
and pussy, but I had to resist, I had plans for later that
meant I would need her pussy to be “oil free”. Besides I was having loads of fun, all her exposed skin was
drenched in oil and I was kneading, massaging - well just
plain groping every wonderful part of her body that was
available to me. Drawing hard on her curvaceous round thighs, taking huge
handfuls of her big round ass, pushing deep into her cheeks,
watching them flex and shimmer for a second as I pulled my
hands away and they return to their natural form. Ellen had her arms in front of her, with her head to one side
and her hands on top of each other under her cheek. I could feel she was relaxed, her skin was free to move in
the grip of my fingers and palms, she has a lot to hold and
it feels amazing. Oil and massage is wasted on skinny girls,
you need a real woman to get the best of this experience.
I straddled her thighs and pushed my hands up her back, spread
out to the side where her breasts begin and then drew downwards
pushing hard inwards; I could feel her soft curves absorb
the pressure till got to her hips where the feeling got even
deeper. The soft glow of the heart shaped fairy lights around
the bed end, reflected on the curves I created on her shiny
oiled skin that makes up her gorgeous full hips. The sight, feeling and sensuality of the motion pumped
up my adrenalin and endorphins. I pulled my hands over her hips to the outside of her big whitegirl
booty, then drew them in across her cheeks, I pressed my
thumbs into the crease where her cheeks met her thighs and
with my fingers spread I began to close my grip tightly on
her flesh, pulling her cheeks apart as I went, to expose
her second hole. I worked her several times, varying the
path across her bum so as to appreciate every inch. My cock
was getting hard now and I wanted some attention. It was time for Ellen to return the favour for the massage,
and she was going to do it by taking me in her mouth. I gently
climbed off her legs and made my way around the bed and stood
in front her so my dick was facing her. We have a high bed,
which is roughly thigh height on me. She was still lying,
but all she had to do was prop herself up on her elbows and
I moved in closer, at first, she took the base of my cock in
one hand and pulled down on my already hard shaft to lead
my tip to her lips. Her mouth was half open and she used the tip of her tongue
to tease the head of my dick, the first touch always sends
a shiver through me. I could feel the warm firm and slightly
rough texture gently massaging me. She always starts so
gently, it builds anticipation for the real deal that is
about to come. Let there be no mistake, Ellen is good at sucking
cock, it’s understandable though, she has had a lot of
practice on me and when she is in the mood she loves of having
her mouth filled with a hard shaft, no doubt, I’m a lucky
guy. She slid her lips over the whole head of my cock and began
to suck, I could feel her tongue still caressing my tip inside
her mouth. I love it when she does that but I want her to go
deeper. No guy can say that watching a hot girl sliding her lips up
and down your cock is not a major turn on. Either that or something
is wrong with them. It’s not often I have to ask Ellen for a blow job, she gives
willingly, as I do to her. I know when she does, she enjoys it, and that’s an important
factor. It has to be genuine or you can’t feel the passion.
I sure as hell was feeling the passion then. Her eyes were
closed and she had let go of my cock now, her hands were resting
on the PVC just the sexy movement of her head backwards and
forward. I’m looking down soaking up the whole visual
treat. 15 years we have been together and I appreciate it
as much now as I did the first time she did it. She pauses now and then to tease my tip with her tongue. Her
mouth is totally relaxed, every part of it fits perfectly
round my cock, there was no roughness anywhere then, just
the gorgeous warm moist sensation of pure oral pleasure.
I’m nearly always allowed the privilege of taking control
of the motion by holding her head in my hands and using her
mouth as I want it. She trusts me and knows me enough to feel
safe that I won’t choke her. She only deep throats when
she is in control, but that night I directed the action.
I grasped her hair and griped her head firmly from the sides
with my fingers almost meeting at the back of her head. I
held her firm as we made a smooth transition from her moving
to me moving, till eventually I was quite simply fucking
her mouth exactly how I wanted to. That also is another level
of erotic for me. I vary the speed and depth a little and draw
back occasionally so as to feel the sensation of her lips
over the head. I let go of her head and oiled up my hands a bit more and started
massaging her upper back and shoulders. It was an amazing sensation to feel her warm oily skin under
my palms and her warm mouth around my dick as I gently thrusted
in and out of her mouth. At the same time, pressed lightly
with my hands so her skin moved with my movement, repeating
over and over again to all the areas on her back shoulders
and neck. It was like double pleasure for me. The sensuality
of slow massage combined with the erotic feeling of gently
taking her in her mouth. Both stimulating and relaxing at the same time I felt like
I was going to melt… I could see from her movement that her position on the bed
was becoming uncomfortable. I let go of her head and gave
her control back. I thought things would end pretty quickly
at this point but I received a nice surprise when she took
my shaft in her hand again and pulled me in closer. She then
took the length of my cock deep in her mouth right to the back
of her throat. I watched as she manoeuvred her lips around
my swollen length and adjusted her head to accommodate
me as much as possible. I could feel my tip pressing in the
soft fleshy part of the opening to her throat. I knew I was
in deep, her lips were nearly at my pubic hair. It felt amazing,
it looked sensational I could have just shot my load right
there and then, right down the back of her throat, no messing,
but I held on to it. I love it when she does that for me, I know it’s not a favourite
thing for her, I have to stay dead still and let her make the
moves because she gets close to choking and that would be
a passion killer. She worked me for a few minutes, taking me deep, occasionally
looking up at me and smiling. Well, smiling as much as you can with a cock in your mouth,
she wanted to know I was watching her moving her lips all
the way up and down the length of my shaft, making sure I could
really see the entire length of my cock sliding deep in her
mouth. After that, she started pushing the head into the
side of her cheek, tilting her head side to side and working
in a circular motion, making sure she worked every part
of my cock, it felt so dam good. Finally she took my dick out of her mouth and jokingly slapped
her lips a few times with it, whilst looking up at me and smiling.
I know it’s not meant to be serious, she does it now and
then as a joke because we have seen it so often when we have
been watching porn together. She thinks it’s a bit stupid, like deep throating until
you gag or slapping yourself hard on the face with a dick.
Still it’s our little joke anyway and it makes me smile.
Ellen had given me a lot of pleasure already and my cock was
practically at bursting point so I thought it was a good
time to give a little back. Now was the time to work the plan
I had earlier when I mentioned I would need to keep her pussy
oil free. See the truth is it’s not nice to suck on a pussy
that’s covered in baby oil, it ruins the flavour. She knew what was coming and was already rolling over onto
her back ready to spread her legs. She loves receiving oral
sex it’s almost always guaranteed to make her come so
if you ever get lucky enough to meet her for sex and you want
to make her happy you know what to do. I climbed back up onto the bed, kneeled beside her and began
to run my hands across her Shins, then worked my way up across
knees and on to her curvy thighs and hips, paid some attention
to her midriff and tummy and finished off with her big soft
natural breasts. Her whole body was warm from where she
had been lying on her front when she was sucking my dick,
and she was soaked in oil. Her skin was soft and relaxed,
I love it when she is like that, her flexible extra padding
filled my grip where ever I choose to grasp, and she has so
many good bits, ass, hips, thighs, breasts, tummy - all
felt fantastic. I began to position myself between her legs; I spread them
a little more and lay on my front so my face was close to her
pussy and my hands around the outside of her thighs. I began
to lightly kiss her closed pussy lips and little bit of labia
that protruded through them. I kissed her inner thighs
and pubic mound, then taking small licks to her labia as
I went, just enough to part them slightly and moisten them
a little. I made a point of pausing and breathing so she could
feel me there, I know she likes that. She spread her legs
a little more and I licked a little deeper, breathing in
the delicate musk of her sex and savouring the taste of her.
I slid my biceps under her thighs, wrapped my forearms around,
with my hands pulling down and slightly apart. I broadened
my tongue and intensified the action, lapping on the sides
of her inner lips, pushing my tongue into her vagina, sucking
and tugging on her labia with my lips. I pushed my face up against her open lips, my nose, lips and
chin became wet with her pussy cum, it felt slick and smooth
on my skin. I felt adrenalin surging in my body, I got so fucking
hot when I went down on her. I love giving her oral. Ellen has a gorgeous pussy, just
look at the pictures in our profile and you will see what
I mean, curvy and juicy, just enough labia to play with,
not so much that it is unattractive. Nicely proportioned,
like the rest of her it has a little extra padding which gives
it a nice defined shape, it looks so feminine and womanly,
it feels amazing when you bury you face in her crotch. I took a moment to stop and admire the fantastic sight in
front of me. I must have gone down on her thousands of times
in the years we have spent together and it never gets boring.
I always like to visually remind myself when I’m that
close, I consider myself lucky I to have such a wonderful
plaything. Anyway, I was playing then and it was great, I started working
her clit with my tongue, varying the pressure, sometimes
teasing with the tip of my tongue, sometimes lapping. Sometimes
using a circling motion around her clit and pulling away
and stimulating her lips again. I put my open mouth over
the area where her clit rests and worked it deeply even sucking
her clit into my mouth and slowly massaging with my tongue.
I could hear her starting to moan and breath deeper, she
was starting to wriggle a little and push herself into my
face. I felt her hand on my head pushing me into her. I kept adjusting the movement and working her pretty hard,
I felt a fresh wave of pussy cum surge through her vagina,
I lapped it up with my tongue and spread it around her lips
and clit, strands of the liquid silk drew out from her pussy
to my lips. The lower half of my face was drenched in her cum,
it felt like I could have drowned. I pulled my right arm out
from under her leg and brought my hand up the inside of her
thigh and started masturbating her with my forefinger.
I spread her cum around a bit and licked it up loving the flavour.
I slid one finger into her warm wet hole and as I did so I heard
her moan again and exhale. I know where she likes to be stimulated
in her vagina, she has a bump at the entrance to her uterus,
I have to be gentle with it but she loves a little massage
there so that’s what I gave her. She began to lift her hips
up and down off the bed so I pressed a bit harder and made her
moan a bit more. She was really lost in the sex I was giving
her at that point but it was time to move on though, and I headed
for her G spot. I had to adjust my position so I could reach
it. Basically I had to crouch on my knees so that I could get
my arm up off the sheet and get the right angle in my wrist
so I could reach up in the front of her pussy. Once there I used my forefinger to press all the right buttons.
It took a while for her G spot to wake up as usual, so I had to
vary the action with some attention to her lips and clit.
It’s no good just pounding away at her special place,
it needs caressing carefully. I could feel when it was responding
because her body began to stiffen up. Her vagina gripped
my finger as she tensed. She shuddered and stifled as she
drew in breath. I just wanted to play with her enough to set her up for some
squirting. G spot stimulation and deep hard penetration will usually
set her off but the thing with Ellen is that it doesn’t
always happen I had to get my timing right, too long there
and it would be a passion killer, too little and she and I
wouldn’t be getting wet! Anyway, she was responding less so I knew she wasn’t going
to squirt from the start that evening. Besides she was pulling
my head up by my hair, she wanted me on her clitoris she wanted
to come. Teasing doesn’t often work on Ellen, she doesn’t have
the patience for it. When it gets to where you know she wants
something, there is no point doing anything other than
giving it to her or she will loose the moment. I obliged her
wishes and focused my tongue on her clit again. It usually
takes a combination of tricks to get her a screaming orgasm.
Flicking with the tip of my tongue, circling motion, lapping,
sucking and alternately timed penetration with a couple
of fingers. I began to work my magic and revelled in the feeling of having
my face buried between her legs covered in her cum with her
bucking and writhing with pleasure. She was thrusting
her hips forcing herself into my face. She was really getting
worked up, moaning and breathing deeply, her legs were
beginning to shake and tense up, she was tightening again
on my fingers, harder than ever. Her pussy was swollen up
with blood and muscle tension. I knew it was close because
she began to hold her breath and she pushed her pubic mound
upwards by tilting her hips and tensing her bum. She was
shaking permanently by now and repeating out loud oh, oh,
oh, oooh! I could feel her push out with her pussy as another
flood of cum filled my mouth, she pulled back and pushed
again a few more times, dug her nails in to my head, everything
from her waist down locked up in a massive muscle spasm for
about 2 seconds until, ‘boom’, she screamed out loud
and exhaled violently several times. The orgasm ripped
through her like an earthquake. I knew what was coming next,
it’s a bit that I love. When she comes, she has an involuntary
compulsion to clamp her thighs together, and of course
my head gets clamped right between them with my face pressed
in her pussy which, is literally breathtaking. I love being
smothered by her in that way, it feels so primal, there is
nothing she can do to stop it and I never get time to get out
of the way and why the hell would I want to? So it just happens
and I have to wait till she relaxes. As usual on this occasion she shuddered a few times and steadies
my head with her hand. She gets very sensitive after she’s
come and my nose or facial hair on her swollen throbbing
clit would be very uncomfortable. I carefully waited till she was ready and slowly pulled
my face away. Both her and I were breathing deeply and she
let go of a long hummmmm, as she breathed out. I took a handy wet wipe to clear my face, Ellen doesn’t
like her own pussy cum in her mouth unless she is really in
the mood for it. I climbed on all fours above her so my lips
could meet hers and gave her a light kiss on the lips. She opened her eyes, looked at me and smiled, “that was
nice” was all she said. But I know she meant much more,
but nothing more needed to be said. She tuned her head to one side still smiling and arched her
body to stretch out the tension of the massive orgasm she
just had. As she relaxed she used one hand to pull my hips
towards hers. She almost always likes to be fucked deeply
after she has come. I moved my legs between hers as she spread them and bent her
knees. She opened her thighs to expose her swollen pussy,
glistening with sexual juices. I always have to use caution
here as a badly judged entry could press on her sensitive
clit which would definitely spoil the moment. No worries though, I know her well and can position myself
so I can slide in without a drama. Without any further hesitation
I began to thrust into her. Straight away she was pulling
me in deeper with her hand on my hips and riding her crotch
up against me. Again she was repeatedly moaning, more of
an ah, ah ah, until she stopped to bite her lips and breathe
through her nose. She spread out her arms and spread her
thighs wider, opening herself up, giving herself to me
to fuck her. I started with my hands beside her ribs, propping myself
up with locked elbows, but this is no position to keep when
you are both covered in oil. You need to be pressed close to one another to feel the amazing
sensation of skin and flesh and oil sliding around together.
There was just one part of us that was missing the vital ingredient,
our loins. I took the bottle of oil and liberally squirted
the both of us where we were joined at the hips. The stage was set, it was time to get on with the show. I lowered myself down onto her and slid one arm under her
back and took hold of her neck from behind. My other hand
was free to on the other side to robustly caress her breast,
midriff and hips, I did so as I drove into her deeply and ground
up against her with my hips. She pushed back in return and
we basically fucked each other hard and passionately for
a couple of minuets. I knew she wanted more though and I wanted to feel her squirt
and that wasn’t going to happen by doing what we were doing.
I propped myself up on locked elbows again and intensified
my thrusting. Slowly working up, harder and harder till
eventually I was using the full length of my cock and was
slapping loudly against her as I drove harder and harder
into her throbbing wet pussy. Again she began to tense up
and hold her breath, not so extreme this time though and
the other difference was that I could feel her trying to
push my cock out of her pussy using her pelvic muscles. This
meant only one thing, an ejaculation was on its way. The
ground work with my fingers before had done its job, very
soon things were going to get very wet. I steadied my movement
and kept a constant rhythm, her pussy repeatedly convulsed
and pulsed, she wriggled and writhed in the oil, some little
tremors from her hips and crotch made their way into the
mix of movements till eventually she gave one last push
and let out an ahhhhhhhhh. A warm wave of water washed over
my cock and splashed out of our sex and poured onto the PVC.
I looked down to see sprinkles and droplets of squirt water
dancing between us as we carried on fucking. She relaxed
for a moment, her pussy softened up and went limp around
my dick. She let out a hummmmm and shivered through her whole
body. I gave her a moment to appreciate the feeling and left my
cock out of the action. I sat up on my heals and massaged her
legs a for a while, spreading the oil around on her skin,
I squeezed and kneaded her tummy, breasts and arms also,
making the most of the sensual feelings the moment evoked.
I gently leaned forward and kissed her mouth and made my
way back inside her for more of the same, this time though
I took more for myself, she’d had a pretty good time off
me so far, and I wanted to get mine now. I put aside technique
and intuition and did what suited me for a while. I lay on
top of her and relaxed and fucked her in the missionary for
a while whilst feeling her thighs and hips, she knew I was
having my moment and she gave herself to me to do as I choose.
I don’t need any specific position or stimulation to
come. I just like a lot of variation and visual action. We
nearly always sex with the lights on because I want to see
what’s going on and I get turned on by seeing her in all
the different positions I like to fuck her in. She had relaxed her body and lay back waiting for me to use
her as I want to. It’s no problem for her she knows I’m
not going to cross any boundaries and she enjoys pretty
much everything I want to do anyway. Besides she gets a kick
out of being submissive and being told what to do and used
as a fuck toy. I hooked my arms around her thighs and pushed her legs up
in the air so she was in a seated position on her back. I fucked
her good and deep that way. Next I adjusted my grip on her
legs so that I was holding them in place with my hands instead
of my arms, took a moment to massage her thighs and bum whilst
still working her with my cock. Then I sat up, held her legs
straight up in the air by her ankles and give it to her again.
I love looking down and watching my hard cock sliding in
and out of her hot oily pussy. I turned her on her side, supported
the upper leg with my hand and slid into her from the side.
I love watching her cute tummy and big tits move with the
motion, I get to massage her ass a bit with my free hand and
rub up the side of her body. I fucked her pretty hard in that
position and the feel of my ass rubbing on her lower thigh
was a big turn on. I felt my cock twinge and I knew it was going
to be my turn to come soon. I climbed off her thigh and let
her other one down a little. I repositioned my elf from behind
so we were kind of fucking doggy style from behind. Again
I fucked her pretty hard, slapping my hips up against her
relaxed behind. I reach round her sides, one hand over and
one hand under, it’s easy to do when you are lubed up with
oil, everything slides in to place nicely. I grabbed her
breasts and held on to them as I carried on pounding away
at her, I pulled myself in close and squeezed harder on her
tits and fucked her as deep I could. She was loving every
minute and so was I, both of us were breathing deeply, giving
out all the typical sexual moans and groans. We get pretty
loud when we make love and I know the neighbours can hear
us but I really don’t care. I love getting on with my wife
and nothing is going to restrict the passion and pleasure.
I was seriously horny by now, and I wanted to fuck her on all
fours before I came. Quietly I told her “I want you on your
hands and knees”.. In a flash she was up and in position
waiting for it. She loves being taken from behind and I love
giving it, so we were both going to have that pleasure. She
was resting on her forearms; her back arched, bum in the
air. Her legs were spread apart and I had the perfect view
of her pussy between her thighs, she was wet with oil and
natural juices. With the awesome sight before me I had no
doubt she was going to make me come. I leaned in towards her
and spread my hands in a circling motion over her lower back
and bum. I pulled her big round ass and my crotch together
for a little grinding action. I was craving the feel of her
up against me, she felt so damn good backing her healthy
behind into me trying to get me inside her. I wasn’t having
it yet though. I pushed her away a little so I could run my
hands across the back of her curvy thighs and broad hips.
I took my cock at the base of the shaft and used my tip to tease
her open pussy lips, she exhaled and moaned as I did so, tilting
her hips up and down, yearning for my hard length inside
her, she started rocking back onto me, desperately hoping
to swallow up my cock in her wide open hole. I know she doesn’t
care much for teasing and she was as hot as she was going to
get, I lent back on my heals so as to get a better view of her
fantastic rear profile, her swollen plump pussy, perfectly
placed between a gorgeous pair of full thighs topped off
with her nice full ass. I could see droplets of shiny pussy
cum on her inner pussy lips, running down and collecting
where her lips meet at her clit. I so wanted to taste her,
but the moment was too urgent, it had already been to long.
My cock was throbbing and she was aching for it. My shaft
still in my hand I lined it up for penetration and lifted
myself off my heals, as I rose I plunged myself deep inside
her. The feeling was breathtaking and she let out a loud
moan from deep within her throat, it was almost a yell, follow
by a sharp intake of breath. Her vagina was so wet that my
cock slid in without a hint of friction, there was no way
I could have got it wrong, she clamped her pelvic floor muscles
hard on me as I immediately started pumping her hard. Her sexy bum was bouncing off my hips with a loud slapping
sound, I paused a moment to drive my cock deep, pressed hard
up against her gorgeous padded cheeks. I tilted my hips
to adjust the angle of my dick to poke and prod my way around
inside her. She ummd and ahhhd as I bounced from her G spot
to the mouth of her uterus and off her inner vaginal walls.
She backed up hard on me when I hit the bits she liked, her
pussy cum squelching between her freshly shaved vulva
and my smoothly trimmed cock and testicle sack, it felt
like liquid silk if there could be such a thing, and it sounded
so damn sexy it just added to my already sky high state of
arousal and took me to another level. I had reached the point
where all I wanted to do was fuck her and come. This was my
moment now and I made the most of it by grasping and pulling
at the side of her tummy and hips whilst fucking her so intensely
she was forgetting to breath, her vocals became more frequent
and louder, her head was beginning to nod up and down in time
to the motion as she began to tense up her whole body, faster
and faster harder and harder, I could feel her pushing with
her pussy like she was trying to push me out of her, I knew
what was coming again, , She was hard swollen and tight,
I was still inside her hard and swollen and straining, she
had one final massive involuntary bodily spasm and then
bammm.. Once a huge gush of warm wetness squirted out over
my cock. It drove me absolutely of the scale and it felt like
I practically exploded as I pulled out of her and came heavily
over her ass and pussy. The thick white sticky cum stuck
in some places but rolled of the oil, down her cheeks, pussy
and legs in others. It was so fucking hot to look at. I was
still masturbating and feeling the aftershocks, the sight
before me was keeping the sexual euphoria going for longer.
My cock was pulsing in my hand, still trying to ejaculate
cum even though I was completely spent, it was all over her
and I’d had a massive orgasm. I collapsed on the bed next to Ellen, exhausted. We turned our faces towards each other and smiled, I reached
out and touched her cheek, she put her hand on my chest and
we shared the afterglow for a while. Kind of sexy and kinky
to think we were lying there in oil, sweat, cum and squirt
water and not really bothered by it. I thought it would be a good time to take a few pics to remind
us of good times and to share with you guys out there on AdultFriendFinder.
So they are in an album on the profile.


Unlike hardcore and kinky sex, photography is not one of
my talents, I experimented with the camera on different
settings so there are a few different looking pictures.
Either way, we hope you enjoy looking at them as much as we
enjoyed making them. If we are completely honest it didn’t end there, after
we took the pics and had a little rest complimented with
a couple of gulps of wine we got horny and fucked for another
half hour. There was more squirting and both of us came again.
I really can’t be bothered to write about it now though,
it has taken long enough to write this much, I guess we can
say, that sometimes, we just can’t get enough!




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