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7/19/2018

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This was like reading a good sex novel. It kept my attention.
HOT...Keep it up!!!!

8/18/2008



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Your one hell of a story teller, extremely erotic ..I enjoyed
the anticipation ..can't wait to read part2...thanks

8/18/2008



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I CAME TWICE, and was well on my way to a third when i finished
part one. Now I'm going on to part two!


...seveninch...{;-{)}

8/19/2008



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1 hell of a story , erotic as I've ever read. Keep up the
good work. Can't wait to read part II. Great Job

8/19/2008



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One word "Great!"

8/19/2008



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WOW!! Clean up isle 2 and 3!! You gave an excellent visual.

8/19/2008



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great story. very well written

8/19/2008



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wow that was the hottest story ive read anywhere......please
write more!

8/19/2008



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Bravo! Excellent story, ,, ,held my attention as I stroked
my way through the escapades.....Thank you!

8/19/2008



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This is extremely arousing at points. Kind of long. Extremely
erotic.

8/19/2008



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that was a great story

8/20/2008



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well done kept me up to the end.

8/20/2008



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Awesome. Great erotica. I can't wait to read part 2.
I hope there is plenty more to come.

8/22/2008



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WOW!! took 3 days to read withour cumming ..keep it going.



should probably publish.

8/25/2008



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Fantastic! This was a full two climax experience.

8/25/2008



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hot story, great one. congrats.

9/6/2008



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Great story, detail expression of emotions, keep it up...



This inspires us to write one like this...

9/26/2008



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You have got to be the best erotic writer i, ve ever had the
pleasure of reading , you don, t miss a treat the way its
writen i feel all the emotion that went into it you really
should publish some of your work it, s top shelf keep up
the great work


Brett

10/1/2008



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don't know why...just love bro and sis getting freaky

12/9/2017



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