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Oh my! That was pretty good. I think it is long and seems unfinsished,
but still very exciting to think about.

5/24/2007



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You never came, did you?

5/25/2007



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quote smoothguy008:
You never came, did you?
No. I typically write my female characters as being in complete
control and of the opinion that sex is solely for the pleasure
of the woman. The only time the male character will orgasm
is when she wants him to or on accident or through an act of
disobedience. My style of FemDom focuses on the gratification
of the female character (usually) at the expense of the
male character.

5/25/2007



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Let me see if I have it right? Everything, all the pleasure,
is for the female, and the male gets nothing but pain and
humiliation, ...???


Hmmmm, ... I don't want to jump to any premature conclusions
here, but I think that's an indication that s-o-m-e-b-o-d-y
is a sick, twisted f**k.


The writing isn't too shabby though.

5/29/2007



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quote rm_hard2beat77:
Let me see if I have it right? Everything, all the pleasure, is for the female, and the male gets nothing but pain and humiliation, ...???

Hmmmm, ... I don't want to jump to any premature conclusions here, but I think that's an indication that s-o-m-e-b-o-d-y is a sick, twisted f**k.

The writing isn't too shabby though.
Thanks for reading, and thanks even more for your comments.



Sick? Twisted? Well, that's subjective, but (I think)
no more so than anyone who writes about the darker or more
sensational aspects of our lives. Would you consider Stephen
King sick or twisted? Just because his mind can reach beyond
the pale of normalcy, in no way means that he wishes to fulfill
the fantasies his (evil) characters act out on the pages
of his novels. I'm not trying to compare my writing
to his--only our strategies for getting people's
attention. I like to polarize my audience. Love me, hate
me, but please take a side.


Thanks again for your comments.

5/30/2007



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Just too long. Loses the reader.

6/7/2007



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quote rm_onetomwill:
Just too long. Loses the reader.
Yes, I believe you are right. For this format, I should probably
keep it under 2000 words. [over 6000 as is]


Thanks for your input!

6/7/2007



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Hahaha, your replies to the posts are spunky. As a Domme
I enjoyed your insight into your submission. I would love
to hear more about your oral skills both on cock and your
Mistress

6/12/2007



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