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7/21/2018

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Very very well written. Had me captivated and enjoying
every thought. Well done. dont stop now.

2/24/2012



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Bloody hell! At last a fantastic , well written story that
keeps you reading and wanting more.

2/24/2012



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Question to the readership- as I get older, I feel that I
should be less explicit in the description of the sexual.
I didn't re-edit this short story to clean that up but
would like to. I think it is better to allow the reader's
imagination to color in the outline presented by the writer.
However, I do not write for others. I write for myself as
a benign way of dealing with the frustration of these things
never being the reality. Most of your better writers write
because of the void in their lives. What does that say about
me? So would you rather see greater description, less description
or is this somewhere about right?

2/24/2012



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well written..you have a flair for a penmanship..Keep
up.

2/24/2012



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An extraordinary story for this venue, well done and well
said. You have captured the essence of a later in life connection
between two people who match perfectly. It has only happened to me once, at 63, and I will never forget
her. We did not marry because of problems with her children,
but person to person she and I were perfect for each other.
I would be blessed if I ever find another perfect match without
the family problems.

2/24/2012



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I agree: incredibly written, deliciously descriptive, absolutely
accurate in introducing and revealing the characters.
This is paced very well, enticing the expectations. You
have an excellent way of presenting passion without being
crass, so your instincts in writing are good.


The only other author on this site to present this quality
of work is Classygal1000. The difference between you is
she presents the woman's view, you present the man's.



Yes, I hope to see more.

2/24/2012



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One of the best stories I have read on this site. Very well
written and suspenseful. Outstanding!!

2/24/2012



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This is the best story I have read on this site to date. It
held me captive right until the end. Great job, I will look
forward to the next one by you. Again thanks

2/24/2012



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Ric, just bought an '09 Dyna with 1300 miles on it! Can't
wait for warmer weather. My last harley I rode from Key West
to Anchorage. Those days are long over!

2/24/2012



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Exquisite...no other superlatives needed. I disagree
with your premise you should use less detail; i.e., as the
intensity builds, let the verbiage follow.

2/24/2012



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OUTSTANDING, very erotic writing !!!!!!!!!!!!! I wouldn't
change anything. I'll be looking for your next installment
on this story.

2/24/2012



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Fantastic short erotic story. I say give the next great
story more description in maybe the third person. bravo
for making this tops in 73, 000 stories

2/24/2012



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Fantastic! As a 71 yr old I apreciate the notion that we can
still be passionate. I hope I can find even half of what you
did. Please give us more!



rarewine

2/25/2012



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BTW, this is just a story that came from my imagination.
All characters are fictitious and, unfortunately, only
coincidentally resemble anyone you or I happen to know.
I like JRRT explanation of where stories of fiction come
from. He said they were like leaves on a great tree. THe writer
merely unfolds one and reads the story and then recounts
it through his own imagination and verbage. It would be
a great reality, however! I think that is why so many like
the story.

2/25/2012



Block comments from peripetia2

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Greart writting, enjoyed reading it even thogh it was
fictional, well done keep it up.......

2/27/2012



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AWESOME ! I met a lady at Mcdonalds yesterday !That was had
my interest beyond all else , delightful!

4/12/2012



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This is excellent! It guides, captivates, evokes future
memories.

4/13/2012



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