Wow, at first I thought this was gonna be another sick insest
story, but even though it was brother and sister it was very
well told and made my pussy very hot with your details. Good
stuff! Cant wait for more.
Kisses

wow its the better story i ever read i really like it what
kelly think is all is in my mind also

Great story, cant wait for chapter 2

Good job, love the balance of revenge and business.

Well written and very sensual! Can't wait to read the
next chapter!

teriffic. don't keep us waiting too long for the next
installment.

amazin stuff....

Fantastic, can't wait to hear what happens next.

Good, very good. When will the second chapter come?

I've definately read this somewhere, but it is good.

Man oh Man I only read part of the story and it made me so horny,
I'll read a little more of the story later. You dad a
great job writing and the details are excellent. Keep them
cunnin

I cant wait to read more from u. that was a very exciting story
to read n whoever doesn't get horny on reading this
should seek medical attention. that was great man keep
it hot!

Dayum this is a hot story!!

yea loved the whole thing you go girl !!! love sluts

Very well done... loved every bit of it ...

good story it is really excellent the a7dath is good

have to say the kid will go far in life, John also better watch his back side!! never know when a deal could go bad!!!

Extremely well written, with plenty of action - looking forward to the follow up

Awesome story. Very well written, thought out and conveyed. I surely hope there will be more to come.

Impressive narration of deal setting in this story.