OMG, this was the best story I've seen on this site.
Have to admitt I had some initial doubts about this story
since you wroted in 3rd person, but the erotic suspense,
the fullfillment, I wouldn't change a thing about
it. Wonderful story, and very skillfull, and detailed
writing.

Thank you for your kind comments. I really hadn't thought
about it, but all the stories I have written...for the most
part...have been in 3rd person. All my stories are very
personal though. They are all based on either things I've
done, conversations I've had, real people I know,
or fantasies that I have. They may be 3rd person, but I am
writing about myself.


I will post another of my stories in the next few days. Hope
you enjoy it as well.

How were you able to find that pussy amoung all that fat???

Dear Ms. Katzass3....


I will only dignify your hateful comment with a response
once. You are arrogant, rude, bitchy, and I bet that no one
loves you quite as much as you do. Get it? Or do I have to explain?

I, and my playmates, have no problems finding anything,
thank you. And I dare say I probably have more positive reponses
than you ever dream of. Know why? Because I am a real person.
I am nice to people, I am fun and funny, and I have skills you
couldn't hope to have. So, little girl, don't
waste my time and clutter up the internet with your hatred
of those you deem "not worthy" of you. Hang out
with the Paris Hiltons of the world and all the shallowness
that has to offer. And good luck with your search for playmates
that are good enough for you. You poor thing. I feel sorry
for you.

Doc.....I think I love you!!!
Wonderfully said. Thank you honey.