poetic words from an amateur.  

vixenslounge 50M/49F
158 posts
1/1/2006 10:25 pm

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4/26/2006 8:47 am

poetic words from an amateur.

ok well i'll begin by saying that i'm a writter and a singer,my words are best when i'm singing,as i write in song.i'll do my best now even though i'm still shy at expressing myself this way to others.it's much easier when singing and those around me can feel my emotion.bare with me......here i go........ I thought you loved me,but then you walked away,leaving me confused,with nothing to say.As my tears fall,you begin to pray,praying ...to walk away,But my pain holds you close,with that,you have nothing to say.My heart is broken,why?why?i ask,for my love is not a token.I have given myself,all my soul,and then for you to leave me,you took my control,But yet,i still try to hang on,to what confidence,i have,Knowing...maybe this is wrong,My love,my love,i ask?I am no longer me,Then i ponder,were in the past?? Why,is this such a strange love?,When i give myself so completely?,Not ever thinking, you would leave me........Forever..... Well this is my 1st writting in here,i am better but let me know what u think ok ???thanx.....miss vixen xxoo.

tillerbabe 57F

1/1/2006 10:53 pm

keep writing hon....I'll be back. (thank you for visiting me!)

pierd 53M
222 posts
1/2/2006 12:03 am

Unusually melancholic for New Year's day - I hope it doesn't refer to something very recent...

more on my blog, http://AdultFriendFinder.com/blog/pierd

rm_MasterHump 39M
52 posts
1/2/2006 10:24 am

That was sent straight to my soul when I read it, very deep, i don't think you need to sing it to me for me to feel the emotion, i felt it. It was painful, but beautiful.

vixenslounge 50M/49F

1/3/2006 7:13 am

Goldmember,thankyoufor your thoughts and the compliment.miss vixen

vixenslounge 50M/49F

1/3/2006 7:15 am

Tillerbabe i will,and as for visiting you,your welcome.miss vixen.

vixenslounge 50M/49F

1/3/2006 7:20 am

Pierd,well no this isn't something that happened recently,but i have had my share of sorrow,thank you for seeing into my words.miss vixen.

vixenslounge 50M/49F

1/3/2006 7:26 am

Masterhump,i am so moved by the way you felt when you read my poem,i'm truly touched,thankyou,i'm assuming you too have also felt this way,like so many others.miss vixen.

EdgeofdesireM 48M

1/4/2006 10:24 am

Miss Vixen:
Allow me also to express the sincere sentiment of encouragement. The words when spoken from the soul are always evident in their expression. Please do not retreat within the shyness, but continue to step forward boldly, seize the spotlight and indulge us all in your soul-speaks. We, your audience awaits these with just as much eagerness as the delictable images.

vixenslounge 50M/49F

1/22/2006 8:58 am

EdgeofdesireM.....i must say that such inspiring words from a man who writes so emotionally,thankyou for your kind and inpiring thoughts.I also enjoy reading and indulging myself in how you so carefully and deeply express yourself.I will continue to share my feelings and expressions of happiness,sorrow,and all of the other emotions that i continue to go through, in this very interesting road that i walk in.

rm_fernihot22 34M

3/10/2006 12:03 pm

mmm you are hot send me a message,lol.

rm_fernihot22 34M

3/10/2006 12:04 pm

you are hot, send me a message,lol.

vixenslounge 50M/49F

3/12/2006 8:29 am

fernihot22,thank you for your compliments.....miss vixen xxoo.

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