on hating my lover's pillow  

supinefeline 52M
660 posts
2/23/2006 6:55 am

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on hating my lover's pillow

there you lay upon her bed,
keeper of her sleeping head,
here the dent where she has lain,
bruised the surface of your plain,
its to you my lover turns,
when her mind the darkness yearns,
and she be yours when passion spent,
you be the one to bear her scent,
and when in the morning raise,
you be the first to have her gaze,
or when in pain, or shed a tear,
it is you that she draws near,
and when she leaves and my heart burns,
its to you that she returns,
though you just a pillow be,
it is you that cradles sweet lilie.

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i hate your pillow lilie!

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SxyCrazyCool 39F

2/23/2006 8:06 am

Isn't it a miraculous thing that can Inspire people to such Beauty..

~*xXx*~
~*sXy*~


Sister_Act_4_You 39F/39F

2/23/2006 6:47 pm

I so love the sweet sorrowfulness of this!

do you recall, once before, i mentioned how i love the way that you see "ordinary things"?

please make no mistake about my words; it is not lilie who is ordinary....but, rather, your vision of her pillow. you are an astounding wordsmith, supinefeline.


supinefeline 52M

2/24/2006 5:29 am

SXXY yes, you are right, an extraordinary thing inspired me to write this. thanks for visiting.

Supinefeline


supinefeline 52M

2/24/2006 5:31 am

b]SA4U ... i am blushing as a sit here. the truth of the matter is that nothing is ordinary under the right circumstances. perhaps it is that that makes some things ultimately special, they change the way in which we see the mundane things around us, give small things new meaning, make us perceive our place in the universe and the things in our universe differently! thank you as always for your kind words!

Supinefeline


moonfire2u 71F
2602 posts
2/25/2006 6:21 am

I too am touched by your sweetness

kind thoughts,
Moonfire


supinefeline 52M

2/26/2006 7:48 pm

moonfire ... i am touched by your kind words, and you know as always your kind thoughts are sincerely returned with extra added on!


__Huntress__ 56M/59F

3/1/2006 7:04 pm

I simply do not have your gift ... this is perfection, Supinefeline ... stunning in its simplicity and perfection absolute ...

{=}


supinefeline 52M

3/2/2006 6:00 pm

huntress ... but you are wrong, you do!


lilie1977 41F

3/3/2006 12:47 pm

supinefeline,my pillow holds me and knows me,who think of you...a silent pillow


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