in sympathy for my shadow  

supinefeline 52M
660 posts
4/16/2006 10:39 pm

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6/5/2008 1:30 am

in sympathy for my shadow

oh dark one,
oh loyal one,
keeper of my shape,
betrothed to my figure,
i offer you this,
in sympathy.

for though with me,
you will raise the belt,
you will never know,
the passion of the stroke,

for though your yearning lips,
like mine will seek her mouth,
you will never feel,
the silky wetness there.

and when i reach to take her breast,
you will have no choice but to follow,
though you will never know,
the hardness of the bud, the gentle slope.

though you have eyes and ears and nose,
you will not sense the beauty of her visage,
not have the scent of her womanness,
nor hear the music of her cries.

and when the time comes,
though hard and rigid you will be,
you can never know the glory,
of her possession.

yours is a suffering,
not meant for mortal man,
but best kept,
at the mercy of the light.

for you lilie1977 i honor you with my 100th post. i am not a shadow. i am real!

photo: all rights reserved. supinefeline 2006

lilie1977 41F

4/17/2006 10:44 am

yes, you are real. i will touch you and kiss you soon.
you reminded me of mind by your beautiful words. ARIGATOU!

supinefeline 52M

4/18/2006 6:16 pm


your words of thanks have no meaning to me, as it is me who should thank you for opening my eyes, unleashing my will, for allowing me to explore, the beauty that is you. you have given back to me one of the greatest things i possess... the desire to write. for long it was caged, dormant and rotting, and yet now through your passion it has been given free reign.

thank you

__Huntress__ 56M/59F

4/29/2006 7:55 am

Perhaps one of your best works ! With a piercing that has encompassed all of me this morning, I have been profoundly touched forever by these words to her ... in your absoluteness, you stand simply beautiful !


supinefeline 52M

4/30/2006 6:33 pm

Huntress, your kind words mean so much to me. You are my heat meter. If my work makes an impression on you then I feel somwhow it must be good!


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