Breathless  

spinmedown 50M
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1/26/2006 3:05 am

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Breathless

It's been so long....such a long time....dammit car go faster...No! I wont let you merge....I don't need any more idiots in my way....I need to be there now...NOW dammit....finally...after far too long...I got the call...."I'm back in town. I need you NOW"..."You're twenty minutes away. I'll be there in ten"....that was half a FREAKIN hour ago...the light's yellow, Go You Idiot!....Oh shit!....squeeling stop inches from his bumper....We could have made it!...adrenaline surging higher...blood pounding in my ears as my pulse races on...ruddy flush deepening...I'd be there in the time it will take this light to change!....you don't understand....I HAVE to be there NOW....SHE's waiting....I'm gonna bust thru the windshield and run the rest of the way....it's green....her eyes....her hair...no they are brown...I'm melting like chocolate....her smile....two more blocks....her shoulders...her hands....calm down, boy...that idiot is still in front of you...that merciless idiot....her knees...her ankles...one more block, just one....hurry up! your killing me!...buy a map, you jerk!....her thighs....her thighs against me...her thighs around me....Focus! you're still driving....her tummy....her curves joining...leading me down..Uhhhhhhuhhuh...That was it! That was the freakin turn! You missed it! Stop thinking about her or you'll never make it!....another block further...I coulda been THERE...I should BE THERE...a right turn...her waist...her hips....another right turn....her ass...gawd her ass....stop dreaming...there's the turn....her back....her neck....HER BREASTS, their curves in my hands, their smell, the taste of them...her nipples...I'm STARVIN For THEM....STOP THE CAR....get out...at least try to look cool...Screw that!...Look at yourself...you're a mess....try to walk right and get your sorry butt in the door NOW....down the walk...my arms around her...up the steps...her pressed against me, thighs, tummy and breasts....so close...so close now, not yet....the landing...my arm around her waist...my fingers in her hair...her hands on my ass...fingernail edges swiftly up my spine....fingers meshing thru my hair....pulling my head down...her eyes twinkling with that look.

The door opens....WE ARE HERE....your eyes...I'm falling into them....I can't stop...stepping forward...that look....I'm falling....my hands on your hips....fingers matching their curves....pressing my need in strong, demanding arcs across the firm flesh of your ass....an eternity of need, forcing them down until I grasp each cheek....that look in your eyes that lets me know you understand....the corners of your mouth moving up slightly so I know how much you agree....your hands pulling me down...wanting my mouth closer...our bodies pressed tightly against one another....we have WAITED for this TOO long...my hands squezing the tops of your thighs....pulling you up against me even tighter...lifting you towards my mouth....aching to taste your kiss....lifting you, spreading your legs, wrapping them around me....our lips joining....almost dizzy from the heat of your breath...the savagery of our kiss....feeling your legs lock around me, my forearms pressed against your thighs....cupping your ass in my hands....I take another step inside....our mouths twisting together as we feed on the passion of our kiss...our hunger for one another deepening....another step...feeling my hips moving against the increasing pressure from your thighs....holding yourself against me, rising and falling with the passion of our kiss.

Breaking our kiss and pulling my ear to your mouth...."Wait!" you gasp.....THAT WORD...I have waited, your trip, your call, the drive....I've waited...I'VE WAITED....stiffening fire burns along my spine....burning into my mind....demolishing all thought...burning down my arms...and smouldering in the palms of my hands as I squeeze your ass....squeezing it so hard that I know it must hurt, but I can't let go....pulling you against me....until I feel the heat of your fire where I am hurting most....Don't you feel that? How can you ask me to wait any more?....seeking your mouth as I turn my head....my lips tracing their heat across your cheek....our mouths meeting...almost painfully intense...holding you there...you pull away again and gasp, "The door! Close the door you fool!"....pulling you back again...hands and mouth pressing...twisting...tangling...I bend my left knee to take our weight as I reach back with my right to kick the door closed....both feet back on the ground....spinning in space...falling and falling and falling....I bend both knees and lean forward....pulling you tightly against my crotch....pressing you between my thighs and chest as I crouch down...balancing on my toes, knees fully bent, leaning forward, my hands moving up and down your thighs.....your breathes coming shorter and quicker as I press them out of you...your legs wrapped tightly around my waist....squeezing my breathe out of me...your arms wrapped tightly around my shoulders, clutching my back with your nails....the pain from each one mixing with the fire coursing along my spine....

You gasp,"Don't You...Drop Me"
I hiss, "sssssshhhutuuuup!!!!"

My left hand brings your mouth back to mine...no more talking...my right hand moves forward until it finds the entry hall's Persian runner...knees moving down until they touch....mouths locked together...trading breathes between us....stretching forward....placing you down gently, ass to shoulders upon the rug....the same breathe passing quickly back and forth between us....pressing myself, crotch to chest on top of you...quickly, firmly....looking into your eyes, the same look in them but so much deeper so much nearer...your moist, red lips parted in a half smile half snarl....sliding my left forearm under the small of your back....hot, smooth skin and the velvetty nap of the carpet....fingers curling around the curve of your waist as you bring your legs up over my hips to press against my waist.....our eyes locked together deepening the passion our lips created.....I pull up slightly, holding your gaze....placing all of my weight on your lower tummy....your fingernails tracing across my shoulders....my eyes trace slowly along the features of your face and neck....across your shoulders...along the outline of your open blouse and across the hem of your tank top....slowly over the curves of your breasts...until focused on your left nipple, poised beneath the fabric...my breathe quickens and you press your palms against the tensed muscles of my upper back and shoulders....I quickly glance up and catch you smiling mysteriously....our breathes coming faster and faster....the fires stilled for just a brief moment as our eyes meet.....and we know what must happen next.

A quick movement as I pull aside your blouse and tanktop to reveal my prize....one more moment lost in your gaze before my mouth is on your breast...."ssshhit", I hear you hiss, startled by my sudden savagery....I suck greedily on your breast....opening my mouth wider to pull it in....as much as I can have, and I want more and more....pressing my mouth down against your breast in rhythm with the pressure as I suck on it....starving for your taste, your flesh in my mouth....I hear you gasp from the intensity....I know it is too much, too close to being painful, but I can not stop myself...only enough control left to keep my tongue from touching your nipple....no, not yet....your nails press into my back as you hold me to you....my forearm squeezes you up against me in time with your breathes, controlling them and controlled by them....your thighs crush against my waist, squeezing and releasing in time to my breathes, contolling them and controlled by them....locked together, our needs communicated and controlled by sweetly painful pleasures.....our needs quickening and deepening as I greedily feed upon your breast....until finally I must have your nipple....sucking as hard as I can, filling my mouth with your delicious flesh, I flick my tongue so gently forward towards your waiting nipple....I know you have been waiting for this moment for so long....have been imagining it....dreaming about it....thinking about it for so long....so very long.....I know how sensitive your nipples are...how they are wired directly to other places, secret and special....I know how much your nipples crave attention....demand it almost more than any other part of your body....my entire world now orbits around this nipple....hard and urgent....I crush you against me with my forearm and hear your breathing become rapid and shallow....your thighs jerk upward involuntarily and you squeeze me so unbelievably tightly, pressing between my waist and lowest ribs....clawing at my back....fanning the flames of my desire with your painful need, our painful need...my breathe quick and smouldering against your breast.

I reach out patiently with my tongue....slowly....all around me the galaxy is on fire as I calmly orbit your nipple....we can no longer breathe, our bodies locked together and still as the universe crashes in on us....crushing us...my tongue ever so gently, almost not even touching....slowly draws a line from the edge of your nipple to the point....just a light flick, or two , or three.....you flex against me...I feel your body wracked and convulsing in the tiny space that I have left for you....clutching with your nails and tearing me in two with your legs....

THE PAIN, I MUST BREATHE, NO MORE!!!

I feel you collapse beneath me and I fall the rest of the way....floating....released ...I hear the distant sounds of your arms hitting the carpet after you release me...the sounds of your shoes sliding across the carpet as you relax and lie beneath me.

Our sudden inhales, so delicious...I push myself up and away from you...the first time we have broken contact in an eternity....we have never been apart....I see you, eyes closed, mouth half closed, the snarl gone and only the smile remaining...I look at your breast...wet and red...the deep outline of my teeth still orbitting your swollen nipple.

"Oh God. I didn't mean to do that. I'm so sorry", I whisper.

"Don't be sorry. Don't ever be sorry for that. Let me catch my breathe, and then we'll take care of you."

"You're too late", I laugh.

Breathless......

© spinmedown 2006
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for Edie, I'll take care of the other one soon LOL

The artwork is called 'Titty Study 1' by ROSCOE from my collection. If you're gonna have smut, it better be good. Nobody draws nipples better.


Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde


MaggiesWishes 61F

1/26/2006 4:39 am

To be left 'breathless' is one of my wishes.
But I'll wait, for now.
The artwork is good tho.

warm wishes


SolarPowered0 112M
8031 posts
1/26/2006 7:59 am

Damn, Spin. Titty Study, indeed! Fine work, my friend. Fine work.

Solar...


bardicman 51M

1/26/2006 3:59 pm

shmooooookkkkkkiiinnnnnngggggg !!!!

damn .. smoking hot indeed.

Good work spinnerman



I am not dead yet


spinmedown 50M
3626 posts
1/26/2006 5:51 pm

Maggie! You are in my thoughts. Be happy. Be well. Be safe. And come back to us soon, my dear friend. I will count the breaths 'til your return.

Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde


rm_saintlianna 46F
15466 posts
1/26/2006 8:01 pm

Wow, Holy Nippelage Spin. That was really good.


spinmedown 50M
3626 posts
1/27/2006 3:50 am

Solar and Bard You are both gentlemaen, scholars and fine judges of buttermilk! Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. *Bows*
saintlianna Two nipples up with a spin and a snap, huh? I'm glad Hortence is happy. *Bows Again*

Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde


MyRealLoverOne 47M

1/27/2006 3:17 pm

That was smokin hot!


keithcancook 61M
18125 posts
1/27/2006 10:06 pm

Jeeze spin! I am stunned. I think this style of writing is FANTASTIC! I love how you began the story. I was immediately breathless, and kept getting even more anxious as you got closer and closer to the woman. Now that is good writing to get such a reaction out of me.

I am so impressed with you dude. You ROCK!


_Safira 55F
11260 posts
1/27/2006 10:32 pm

I concur ... that leaves me breathless ... Hmmm ... breathless, breath play? *oh my*

It is off-the-charts hot ... and so are you!

Safira

P.S. Edie is a good Muse.

This is my blog - Comes With Warning Labels. There are many like it, but this one is mine.

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spinmedown 50M
3626 posts
1/28/2006 10:55 am

MyRealLoverOne Welcome Here! Thank you most kindly, kind sir! I'm glad you liked it. *bows again*
Keith Awww Shucks.... To hear such praise coming from someone who has been around BlogLand as long as you is truly heartening. I am very happy that you appreciated it! YOU ROCK, BLOG ON! *takes another bow*
_Safira I am very pleased that you are pleased, m'lady! *bows respectfully*

And ediesedgewick's stories in the magazine are exceptionally tasty!!!

Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde


tillerbabe 57F

1/28/2006 1:12 pm

"Radar Love"..very HOT Radar LOVE!


spinmedown 50M
3626 posts
1/28/2006 3:27 pm

TILLERBABE!!! Welcome Back! I hadn't thought of that. Very well put! That's exactly IT!

Take a bow yourself, because you are my 500th comment!!!

So lets hear it for TILLER!!!!

I couldn't have come this far without your support!
According to tradition, aren't I supposed to do anything you ask or something?
please be gentle with me LOL

Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde


rm_sexxielynn 54F
72 posts
1/29/2006 12:25 pm

Truly breathless, Truly amazing!
The neck orgasm, the nipple orgasm - it just gets better.

I agree with Safira, Edie is a wonderful muse!


my_brkn_heart 57F
71 posts
1/29/2006 2:01 pm

Whew! my whole body is tingling...OMG! You rock...I think I may have to go touch myself. I don't think I can focus, my vision...blurry, fuzzy...nipples hard enough to cut glass... my body goose bumpily...(?) And down there...moist!
Thank you...mmmmmm
(I don't even know Edie!)


ediesedgewick 59F

1/29/2006 2:36 pm

Having--just now--caught my breath, all I can say is...WOW.

Oh yeah, and,
also...

GOOD GOD, MAN--DON'T STOP!
(Where IS the next???)


AtomicArtist0 46M
6015 posts
1/29/2006 6:44 pm

this is great writing. I could really feel the urgency flow through in this. Damn, I wanted to get there myself and fast! Great art, too. I've noticed a couple of nice drawings in your blog. Do you draw and paint?


spinmedown 50M
3626 posts
1/30/2006 12:05 am

flyaway1012 Welcome Here! Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to come back, hangover and all. Take it easy on that stuff: ( the 'Happy' not the whiskey ) you can't imagine what it does to me, and RL 'Blue' OMG. *bows*
sexxielynn Thank you so much. You asked for it. Didn't you? Or was that your twin sister? Love the new handle! *bows again*
Heartfelt Hey! I've missed you.
Wow! I should have done this sooner. I'm glad you enjoyed it. You got me, too! Tell me more.... please, pretty please.... seriously..... More! Check out Edie's stories. You'll love'm. *hug, probably lasting long enough to turn into a hold*
Edie I'm glad you liked it! So...what you're saying....is that you hate.....waiting....cant stand....wanting more....needing more....I see....but you know there will be more....oh yes....you know that.....but you don't know when....and the waiting.....sometimes.....that's the hardest part....am I right? There will be more. I promise. Just be patient with me....very patient....ever so patient. It's coming. Get ready.
AtomicArtist Welcome Here! Nice as hell to see you here! That's a great compliment, coming from a great writer such as yourself. I really appreciate that. We've all felt like that before, huh? I think so.
The art comes from my favorite artists: Rackham, Parrish, Dali, Giger, to name the ones I've used so far. I'm thinking of including a few pieces from my own collection of works by ROSCOE, Julius Zimmerman, and others. Coop and Shag are two of my other favorites. If only I had the dough. And hey, Michael Manning is da man! I might put up a few of my own pieces if I get bold enough. We'll see. Thanks for asking.
BTW- You're LEGO stuff is monumental, dude!!!! Thanks for the tip.

Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde


spinmedown 50M
3626 posts
1/30/2006 12:10 am

BTW~ Edie
Stash makes an Earl Grey tea that is nice, very very nice. You'll see....


Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde


my_brkn_heart 57F
71 posts
1/30/2006 12:38 pm

I will have to go read Edie's stories...if they are just as HAWT!
Mmmmm...
I too have written some erotica, pretty graphic and down right nasty...


rm_1hotwahine 64F
21091 posts
1/30/2006 3:51 pm

okay, that's it. you're now bookmarked.

Yeah, I'm still [blog 1hotwahine]


spinmedown 50M
3626 posts
1/30/2006 8:10 pm

Heartfelt Tell...Me...More!!
1hotwahine Good. Step away from the inbox, and thank you for the compliment. *bows once more*

Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde


AtomicArtist0 46M
6015 posts
1/30/2006 9:02 pm

about artists...shag and coop are great. My faves. Shag (Josh) is a really nice guy. Mark Ryden is my all time fave artist. I've met him a few times. My own art is a combonation of the three. I paint.

Giger is amazing. We really should talk art sometime. Thanks for...um... knocking some sense into me and muscling me into your territory.


spinmedown 50M
3626 posts
1/31/2006 4:06 pm

AtomicArtist Sounds like a kick-ass combo you have there! I have GOT to check it out sometime! Please tell Josh that I want... no, I NEED... a collection of all his Tiki Mugs. I'm working two jobs to pay for them all and typing this reply on my laptop at my second job.
"You want fries with that, sir?"....sorry, I get a bit confused at times. Haven't slept for a month. Everything's going grey.... losing conciousness.... I'll get there... someday.... must have...... "$4.71, please drive thru".
mzhunyhole I didn't mean to do that.... alright, yes I did! It's so nice to see you here, and I'm pleased as punch that you enjoyed your visit. *bows deeply*

Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde


MisterPriapus 58M
6980 posts
1/31/2006 4:54 pm

Uf da, Pal!

First I need oxygen for the sherpa summit trail, and now for this!

Air's feeling a mite rarified, even at only a couple hundred feet above sea-level! Beautiful piece of prose- mondo kudos!!!

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Been a while since they last let me out into polite society. Resurfacing, catching a breath, & catching up.



And while I got my Broad-Brimmed Pimping Hat on, could I cajole all of y'all to Comment on, Alone In A Cloud? It's probably the best thing that I've written!

Lately...

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_Safira 55F
11260 posts
1/31/2006 9:30 pm

Baby ~ I really can't hold my breath much longer (even though there IS something to be said for breath play). Puh-leeeeeeeeeeeeeze!

This is my blog - Comes With Warning Labels. There are many like it, but this one is mine.

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rm_PurryKitty2 49M/51F
9753 posts
2/1/2006 3:07 pm

Your art and words are breath taking.

Purry {=}

Purry


spinmedown 50M
3626 posts
2/8/2006 2:48 pm

Mr.P Awww shucks. I'm speechless. *takes a bow*
_Saphira Just let me catch MY breath first. I'm still a little dizzy.
PurryKitty2 Welcome Here! I'm very happy that you enjoyed the story and the art. Y'all come back now. Ye hear?
*takes one last bow*

Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde


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