From the Unknown Lover...  

rm_unlistedone 66M
3832 posts
11/10/2005 7:30 am

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From the Unknown Lover...

From the Unknown Lover...

As I sat there
with my heart and mind
filled with the important,
unimportant thoughts of life----
I saw you walk by.

You were gay and bright
in your orange flowered dress
and you looked for postcards...
to show people you had gone away to visit.
You kept your back to me
as you moved first this way,
then the other,
so you didn't see me watching you.

Now you walk back
and away from my view.
Only once did you gaze meet my eyes.
You didn't know my heart
passed to you in that single vision...
of warmth.

caressmewell 54F

11/10/2005 9:23 am

That's beautiful!

rm_unlistedone 66M
2718 posts
11/11/2005 11:12 pm

Glad you like it, caress. It is one of my first poems.

Just checked... you were "six" when I wrote this. OUCH!!! I'm really getting old!

May your day be bright and filled with everything that makes you smile.... unlisted

silkysmoothlegs3 106F

11/12/2005 3:34 am

Thats beautiful babes xx

Lovely just lovely

Silky xx

LadySucksss 71F

11/12/2005 1:49 pm

Very nice poetry........ I will check out more too. Thank you for sharing a part of yourself with us........


rm_unlistedone 66M
2718 posts
11/13/2005 12:24 am

Silky, I'm glad you stopped by. You are more than welcome here... anytime. warm hug, unlisted

rm_unlistedone 66M
2718 posts
11/13/2005 12:25 am

Lady, thank you. Interesting blog you have, also. I like it. unlisted

papyrina 52F
21133 posts
11/13/2005 8:48 am

thats short but very lovely,hugs hun

I'm a

i'm here to stay

rm_unlistedone 66M
2718 posts
11/13/2005 9:42 pm

Thanks Papy. I will make you a lover of poetry yet. (abeit, bad poetry!) Love the hugs, thanks.... unlisted

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