Rose petal kiss  

rm_mtnravyn 61M
501 posts
3/5/2006 11:11 am

Last Read:
7/14/2006 4:44 am

Rose petal kiss

This is the first half of this effort. I have bene reading all the "kiss"posts (mags, allyssum, and severla others) and hae been massaging htis into shape.

I was transfixed by her lips
Two beautiful petals ready to unfold
And allow me to experience her depth.
As lips caress lips
She groans and opens even more
She tries to devour me with her intensity.

I grasp her locks firmly
To stave off her hunger
While teasing her lips
And lightly tongues do brush
Setting the mood, slow and smoldering,
Allowing the passion to build.

I feel her lips swell
As if the rose is unfolding
As above so below.
The exploration of lips and tongues
Changes pace
As breath is shared.

A brushing of lips
Fuels the heat of the kiss
the excitement builds
pushing the longing
for penetration
of hot, slippery wetness.

There is a parting
As heated gazes meet
I stroke with a finger
Lips swollen with blood
Then gently invade
her petals unfolding

in seriousness I know
this Is only beginning
For my commitment is made
mutual pleasure the goal
time has no meaning
nature’s mystery to reveal

Lips reconnect
Feverish and demanding
my tongue forcefully probes
She opens and responds
I know I now have
Her firmly in hand.

Her senses are alive
focused on our kiss
my hand now moves
massaging her scalp
slipping and tangling her hair
in strong hands of control.

She feels my strength
As I tilt her head back
Just a bit more.
Lips press harder
Tongue probes deeper,
Wetter and more demanding.

Then the pressure eases,
The caresses gentle
She feels my hardness
Against her thigh
She sees the fire in my eyes
Heat cannot be faked.

The intensity is heightened
Her head is pulled back
She whimpers in sensual thrall
her desirability unquestioned
her passion explodes,
The petals unfolded.

rm_magnet4u22 50F
18406 posts
3/5/2006 11:29 am

Sigh.........very nice and sensual description. The second half may do me in! I think you shaped it very well


saddletrampsk 55F

3/5/2006 11:35 am post

Holly_Would 107F

3/5/2006 9:53 pm

As a woman, and a gardener (with a penchant for roses), I especially loved this!

MillsShipsGayly 52M

3/6/2006 5:24 am

sounds like you have offered her a kiss on the lips ....... of her choosing

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