rm_dragonheat23 52M
977 posts
2/23/2006 10:36 am

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5/30/2006 8:14 am


I met someone in my dreams, an angel on vacation
Succumbed to her spell of celestial fascination

I asked if she could dance, like on the head of a pin
And why such a divine creature had such a devilish grin

Snuck into my world quietly to avoid detection
Pulled some strings to make the connection

She broke some rules in the name of destiny
To be here today and finally show her face to me

Her eyes were jewels, her hair an auburn frame
I felt the dying heart begin to flame

Standing there in shimmering gossamer vesture
The essence of all that is good and genuine and pure

Stepped forward and laid a sweet finger along my lip
And said “come now, let us take that trip”

Reached out to me with a gem laded hand
We walked off together toward a future unplanned


2/23/2006 10:51 am

OMG, thats so awsome!!! I love it!

angelgrrl 49F

2/23/2006 11:03 am

This is absolutely beautiful What wonderful images it brings to mind.

rm_dragonheat23 52M
1158 posts
2/23/2006 11:23 am

H-N-B and Angelgrrl,
Thank you so much. I was thinking of someone special when I wrote it.

caressmewell 54F

2/23/2006 11:24 am

This is quite lovely

angelgrrl 49F

2/23/2006 11:32 am

She is a very lucky lady

moonfire2u 70F
2602 posts
2/23/2006 3:37 pm

Beautiful but I especially liked that you wrote 'I felt the dying heart begin to flame' It made my heart smile...

kind thoughts,


2/23/2006 4:02 pm

WoW, a very lucky lady!!! Ok Now I am jealous!!!!

Allsleeky 37F

2/27/2006 5:47 pm

Beautifuly written.

TheBtchIsHere122 46F
63 posts
2/28/2006 9:03 am

All I can say is WOW!!!

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