For a Friend.....  

rm_dragonheat23 52M
977 posts
6/29/2006 2:55 pm

Last Read:
7/10/2006 7:02 am

For a Friend.....

Your tears like morning’s dew on a daisy
Fall to the parched footing of your soul
All you ask is to love you like crazy
Your beauty to extol

Standing blind to his error
Careless of the precious gift given
Not of gold, but something rarer
A neglected heart must give in

Passion so desperately sought
A desperate hunger, unabated
Satiation not found in the place it ought
The love poems left unstated

So my fair, please smile if you may
With a hug, a daisy, a handhold and a kiss
I invite you to partake of love’s buffet
And at your setting, I leave this gift

mmmslick 106F

6/29/2006 3:54 pm

The last stanza here is amazing ...

A banquet offered in honor of your love ...

Such a beautiful thought ...

rm_dragonheat23 replies on 6/30/2006 6:27 am:
I'm very greatful for your praise. Thanks for stopping by

moonfire2u 70F
2602 posts
6/29/2006 4:08 pm

You are a sweet dragon...

kind thoughts,

rm_dragonheat23 replies on 6/30/2006 6:28 am:
I try (blushing)

Notfunanymore 106F
10289 posts
6/29/2006 4:32 pm

Goodness, I knew you were a man like this! That's why I just gave you props in my blog!!!
Don't think it's up yet though.......

Beautiful! Just like Shaye said!

rm_dragonheat23 replies on 6/30/2006 6:29 am:
Thank you so much for the nod. I think that Popeye said it best "I yam what I yam.

southrnpeach333 51F

6/29/2006 4:44 pm

very moving...

rm_dragonheat23 replies on 6/30/2006 6:40 am:
Thank you, the would be recipent had moved me with her story

Mamacat56 61F

6/29/2006 6:25 pm

Love it ...thank you for sharing

rm_dragonheat23 replies on 6/30/2006 6:43 am:
Thank you. I much prefer to write these type of poems, than the depressing kind, but I just write what I feel.....

534 posts
6/30/2006 12:17 pm

Wow that was amazing....really amazing...Take Care ~D~

HBowt2 60F

6/30/2006 6:03 pm

what a gift....lucky lady...

pet_humility 49F

7/5/2006 5:36 am

You truelly are a inspiration!

Whispersoftly5 53F
15176 posts
7/9/2006 9:31 pm

Absolutely lovely!!!


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