An Effect Of Power Unexpected  

rm_don16428 58M
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3/7/2006 4:25 pm

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An Effect Of Power Unexpected


in toronto i met
a cute young oriental girl
that was from the china district
while at a night club.
she hadn't lived here
for very long -
four months to be exact,
yet her english seemed remarkable,
though coming from taiwan.
she wanted to know if i lived in the city.
i told her i was from erie pennsylvania
and staying at a hotel.
i could tell she hadn't any idea
as to where that was,
so, i simplified my response,
and told her i was from america.
her eyes lit up -
reached for my hand
and tenderly caressed it.
it was enough to make me realize
that being an american
was actually worth it for once!!

49AK 56M
1823 posts
3/7/2006 5:16 pm

Excellent... I really liked that.

rm_don16428 58M
17 posts
3/7/2006 6:11 pm

i'm glad that you enjoyed this piece. hopefully you'll see that i appreciated your comment

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