a regular in my playtime rolodex!  

rm_chanda69 48F
648 posts
6/17/2006 10:27 pm

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a regular in my playtime rolodex!


its about time for a good suck story don't you think? ive spent entirely too long bitching about my knee, life & all the he said she said bullshit.......(good song , btw)
so i think i'll write about a "regular" in my playtime thoughts.......

i have this friend, that has this friend... yeah its one of those... anyway she's been wanting to set me up with him for a while, & i finally agree. she says he breeds & trains saddle horses, looks like a young sam elliot ( a "Mask" & "Roadhouse" cross with no limp), plays pool, & has a Harley. ( when i dream, i dream BIG) i ride with my friend & her boyfriend to asheville to meet him at the mello mushroom. never been there but ive heard great things about it. were seated on the patio when he purrs up on his bike.well cared for, not too flashy, not too loud, just enough rumble to vibrate my chair & everything on it! as he swings one long leg off, he flashes us a smile. he makes his way through the crowd, self assured, but not cocky. when he approaches the table, he heads straight for me, extending a hand with a smile, "i'm Michael, & you must be chanda" as he takes my hand, it is shaking.
dinner flew by, great conversation, great food, & when it was time to go, Michael offers to take me home. of course, since i rarely get a chance to ride a vibrator with that kind of power, i jumped at the chance! we glided through the night, like velvet in moonlight. he asked if he could show me a favorite spot on the way home, & i agreed. my imagination was running wild, stirred on by the thunder underneath me & the feel of his warm back & toned hips between my legs. i snuggled up closer, rubbing my clit against the back of his chaps. the vibration on kitty's bling nearly driving me insane! he pulls onto the parkway, and we are alone on the road. we drive for several miles with out seeing a soul. his hand slips back to caress my thigh, & all i can do is grip him tighter. we wind our way through the night, until he finds the spot he likes. we pull into a small picnic area, just a few tables, & when we get off the bike, he pulls a blanket from the saddlebag. taking my hand he heads for the trees. he leads me down a narrow track, something you'd have to know to see in daylight, & suddenly we break from the trees near a sheer drop off, with a huge valley below, just a few lights twinkling, & a huge full moon glowing down on us.(did i ever tell you what a full moon does to me? anyway...)

he spreads the blanket, & reaches into his jacket pocket & brings out a flask of spiced rum & offers it to me. as i sip the liquid warmth, another warmth is spreading. when i hand him the flask, our eyes meet, & suddenly i know i am about to be HAD. he leans forward slowly, just brushing my lips with his, then teasing my lips with his tongue, then lightly around to my neck, flickering touch of wet warmth, tickle of breath, his fingers tracing up my arm. his other hand is entwined in the back of my hair, gently shaping a fist, holding firmly but not cruel. his fingers find my nipple, then the ring, he draws back to look into my eyes as he gives the ring a little tug, & i gasp, my body twitching.he gives me an evil little grin, then pulls my head back slowly, until i am off balance,leaning on his arm, my head toward the valley below, & all i can see is the stars & moon. my arm grips his, the other flailing to find solid ground. instead he takes my wrist, & adds it to the grip in my hair. now i am helpless, my head buried in his chest, moaning, whimpering helplessly. as his hand slides up my skirt, past my garter,his fingertips barely brushing my lips, his tongue flickering along my neck. as he slowly slides in one finger i feel his teeth on my neck, holding firmly as he withdraws to tease my already swollen throbbing clit. he slides in 2 fingers then 3, all the while holding onto my neck in his teeth. then he bows by back, brings my face to his his eyes on mine as he finds that sweet spot deep inside stroking the heat building, searing tension in my belly i am whimpering moaning wriggling wild eyes begging for release he holds me firm & uncompromising watching my face, i bite at the leather still covering his chest, my hips bucking against him drawing him deeper my back arching, arms spread wide surrender he leans in close to my neck and whispers ..... now....... i am exploding searing flash release inside me his fingers drawing me onward, moaning, eyes rolled up, heaving gasping squeals clit throbbing almost painful thighs clamped around his hand ...........

as i begin to return, i realize i am cradled against his chest. he is stroking my hair. he looks down at me & smiles & says
"and that was only the opening act"

you'll have to wait till next time for the rest of the story children... ms. chanda has an itch to scratch.

BTW just so everybody knows- i have not ever & will not ever ride in or on anything to anywhere with anyone on the first date. ever. but this is the joy of fantasies. i can do things i wouldent do in the real world.
BTW#2 in this particular fantasy i have a jennifer tilly thing goin on.

XXXOOOXXXchanda


OcelotScratch 49M
286 posts
6/17/2006 11:18 pm

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Jennifer Tilly!

I like this. It flows well. I have only two criticisms, and they're both minor. (Don't you hate it that it's easier to point out the things that you do wrong than the things that you do right? And so that's what most of the comments are?)

I like capital letters. I also like punctuation and proper spellings, not that either of those are a problem here. I admit it. I'm a Language Fascist. The English language is already screwed up in so many ways (though screwed up in a way that's good for prose, but bad for poetry) that I'm disinclined to screw it up any farther. YMMV on that.

The other, and it's something to work on, just as I need to, is to develop atmosphere some more. Here, you do well with what your protagonists actions are, and what she is feeling. It'd be nice to have a feel of a stronger setting. What does she smell? What's the texture of his clothes? Is he unshaven, and it scratches?

If you establish this sort of thing, you can make points indirectly. It falls under the old saw that it is better to show the reader something than to tell them.

As I said, I liked it, so I don't want to give the impression that all I'm doing is complaining. And, in a blog post of, what, 300-400 words, this advice is probably overkill. Still, I thought I would mention it.

Did I mention ... Jennifer Tilly?


rm_chanda69 48F
418 posts
6/18/2006 7:25 am

spunky- thanks! these kinds of situations are what earned me the rep as a bitch- by those who didn't really know me. those that did in those days knew me as a friend to count on that would watch your back in a heated moment ( guy came on a job site once looking for money from a co-worker-he didn't have it- & when the thug & his buddy cornered him in a room they thought they were going to get ugly, until i came around the corner carrying a 4 ft pry bar & my most wicked feral grin) ahhhh.... those were the days, before bad knees, & back, before recognition of my own mortality. anyway better to be a once was (bad ass) than a never was.

XXXOOOXXX chanda

XXXOOOXXXchanda


rm_chanda69 48F
418 posts
6/18/2006 7:42 am

ocelot- one of the things i think true maturity gives us is the ability to take & use constructive criticism. so thank you for the imput! i am some what of a language fascist myself. i have a thing for proper use of set & sit, affect vs. effect, etc. i usually use spell check to put the ' in don't, you're etc. but i leave capitalization for effect, rather than italics. also, there are certain individuals whose name i capitalize out of respect, some because i'm a sub, others just because.
as for the atmospheric details, i agree. but i was writing this at 1 a.m. in something of a painkiller float, so i didn't want to go into so much detail that i couldn't finish last night. i've started writing my stories on ya...hoo so i can save them in "draft" to be finished later. so hopefully with the next one i can include more details.
hope to hear from you again soon!

XXXOOOXXX chanda

XXXOOOXXXchanda


rm_chanda69 48F
418 posts
6/25/2006 8:04 pm

Hi Ox!!! glad to see you back! missed you!!
glad you liked the story! i've always had a thing for jennifer tilly-even before i admitted it was a ..thing. watched "bound" w/her- and you... I've been sort of picturing you looking like Dylan Walsh-(& i wasn't far off!) he plays sean mcnamara on Nip/Tuck on FX.- VERY seductive show- i started watching it because it was on in "the shield" s time slot & didn't want to lose track of when the new season started, but i got addicted!!
anyway, thanks for the pic- i usually carry around the camera so i don't have to be in the pic- which means most of the ones i do have are pre-coffee ambush types my daughter managed. i'll try to get a semi- human one for you soon!

HUGGGGS!

XXXOOOXXX chanda

XXXOOOXXXchanda


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