Climax  

rm_WildnSexy80 38F
17 posts
1/7/2006 8:14 am

Last Read:
5/7/2007 7:09 pm

Climax


Feeling his bare skin brushing against my own,
my body begins tensing from his intimate caress.
Laying my head down resting on his chest,
hearing his heart beating pushing me to the edge.
Looking into my eyes he knows my yearning,
This undying obsession yielding to torture.
Biting my inner thigh inevitably dampened,
he suddenly hesitates loving my desperate plea.
The crevice moistening in-between my legs,
delicately left alone right before the climax.
Craving this pleasure demanding even more,
Gently kissing inward closer to my opening.
Moving up abruptly gazing now at eye-level,
arousal at its peak emotions running wild.
My tender neck uncovered affectionately he gnaws,
finding my perfect spot the sensation orgasmic.
My moans unrepressed breathing left inconsistent,
his mouth covers mine staying in the moment.

rm_DaDizneals 36M

1/9/2006 8:18 pm

you know i have to say that actually was an enjoyable piece to read...That's actually alot coming from me as i usually just blog whore around looking for random comments to insert into blogs that seem interesting.

As a piece of constructive criticism you should try making things centered around an everyday situation that comes into something else. I find that initially everyone write poetry that is vague and less specific because when you read "timeless" poetry thats what you see. But the ones that raise an eyebrow and make people remember are the ones that make it so someone in the audience feels they read their own experience, and everyone else wanting to experience it.


wanderlust232 50M

2/4/2006 1:00 pm

nice erotic poetry...i'd say you hit all of my senses with that...and now I know just what you want


ILM09 43M
1 post
3/25/2006 4:01 pm

if you are as sensual as your writing, we must meet......


Biggen2123

1/7/2008 9:49 pm

I really like your blog!!


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