rm_VladX4 44
10 posts
1/18/2006 4:09 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm



In her eyes, I'm drowning.
Her nails on my back,
deep scratches,
a drop of blood... Breathless...
Flick of the tongue,
hot on my hips.
The feel of her teeth.
I shiver... Breathless...

She writhes above me.
Sliding my hands up her sides,
the curve of her breasts.
She presses down,
driving me into her
as I grasp my hands
around her neck.

"You are mine." I whisper.
she surrenders
in ecstasy,
without a word.

In my eyes,
she's drowning.

rm_PurryKitty2 49M/51F
9753 posts
1/18/2006 5:02 pm


Purry {=}


THEcowgirl37 35F
5 posts
1/18/2006 5:03 pm


SaucyNSassy 40F

1/18/2006 6:43 pm

Excellent! I'm going to be brutally honest. Most of the poetry and prose I read on this site really suck but THIS was intriguing and flowed beautifully. I loved it!

angelofmercy5 60F
17881 posts
1/18/2006 7:05 pm

Thats really beautiful.

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