Value me for what I give to you....  

rm_Sunnie17 46F
9 posts
5/1/2006 1:23 pm

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8/9/2006 2:06 pm

Value me for what I give to you....

Value me for what I give to you;
All the rest hold in your heart.
Life does not fulfill our wishes;
Even lifelong lovers part.
Now let yourself be lulled by kisses,
Take from the moment all that's due;
Inter within what your heart misses,
Nor let what's false destroy what's true.
Enjoying love requires art.
Some day you know we would part....

Toni


loadeddice05 45M

5/1/2006 1:31 pm

Hmmn!! I don't get into poetry to much!! But it's pretty!! Ok. I like it!!! Anyways!! Now we can spend all day together!! It's like passing notes!!! LOL!!!!


Sulabula 46F
12659 posts
5/1/2006 2:16 pm

How lovely

Sula xxx

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angelofmercy5 60F
17881 posts
5/1/2006 2:29 pm

Beautiful....and sad.


rm_Sunnie17 46F

5/2/2006 12:20 am

Ty 4 the sweet responce


SirMounts 103M

5/4/2006 1:04 am

Very pretty. As you are without... and must be, within.
Welcome to blogging, Toni. *smiling*


rm_rob01011111 51M

5/6/2006 4:14 pm

It was great! I liked it a lot.


rm_lovesex2day 56M

7/17/2006 3:07 am

Sonnie, great poem, it speaks the truth about what one should value in their relationship, but like most, one forgets or takes it for granted.


rm_Sunnie17 46F

8/9/2006 2:06 pm

Awe well ty Joe............U r so right....And ty again 4 ur kindness...I hope u find that special person 2 feel that way with u...U r a great guy.......


rm_elzorro20022 64M
39 posts
1/14/2007 11:05 am

Wow,...That's a very tender poem...We need to be reminded not to forget those things which are close to the heart...!Thank you..!


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