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3/27/2005 7:16 pm

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm


Lying in my bed, sorting through my thoughts.

Wondering if you want me in spite of all of my faults.

Don't have the confidence to do the things I need to do,

To get into the position that allows me to persue you.

I could try harder to be perfect, but no one else on this earth is.

I see you surrounded by your troubles looking helpless.

Why can't you see that my love love is selfless?

All of the things I'm afraid to say and actions I dare not do...

Are simply too risky when it comes to maintaining my closeness to you.


keithcancook 61M
18138 posts
3/27/2005 8:38 pm

Nice poem neopoet. keep posting.

GoddessOfTheDawn 106F
11240 posts
3/28/2005 3:29 am

Nice piece of poeetry ...

Sometimes feeling is even better when able not to think too much tho

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