November 7, 2005  

monkey_bone27 30F
10 posts
11/7/2005 1:55 pm

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November 7, 2005

Fall is so pretty. It's like senior prom, everyone gets dressed up just to get naked
Here's a poem i wrote:


love is blind,
you can't see it
but you can touch it
hear it
say it
feel it

it can peirce your heart
when you least expect it
it can unmask your emotions
and reveal your deepest feelings
it can make you happy
and relieved all at once

it can take you to ecstacy
another world
and make you untouchable with all power
just before it makes you
crash and burn
then leaves you with a scar
that never fades

love is not just a word you say
it is a feeling
a rush
another life
an escape, yet a trap
a sense all on its own
a word with no category

love is blind
it will pull you into the darkest tunnel
on an unknown journey
take away your innocence
reveal you fears
and rip your heart out
then leave you begging for more

love is blind in no sense.

OneLittleMoment 39M/34F
43 posts
11/7/2005 4:24 pm


rm_kazooguy3 50M

11/7/2005 4:41 pm

That is very good!!

rm_simon234233 40M
37 posts
11/9/2005 11:47 am

wish i could write like that!

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