A Poem - From a Boy  

lustcurious42 57F
257 posts
8/30/2006 9:15 pm

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9/2/2006 1:36 pm

A Poem - From a Boy


I hope GoodatPoetry2 forgives me, but I just couldn't resist. He wrote a poem, from a woman's point of view. And I think he's really special, really I do. And I think he is one of the few. So I had to write a rebuttal, and I ask forgiveness from you men in advance. To get perspective from his excellent poem, read [post 489372] first. And GAP, I just wish all men thought like you do!!! But below is my version of what goes on in their head. Ok, spank me.......

I can tell just what you're thinkin'.
I can read it in your eyes!
You're thinkin I want to score some pussy',
Get you in bed with my sorted lies.

Just HOLD YOUR HORSES, babygirl!
Let's just take us a little time.
Cause I'm lookin' for that girl real easy,
Ain't I just a slime?

You're lookin' like a bagger!
Just depends if something else comes along.
This ain't like being at A.F.F.",
I ain't done nothing wrong

I ain't no teeny-bopper,
I'm a man way past my prime!
I've played the game so many years,
And I've sure enjoyed my time.

I used to like them a little easy,
Cause I like to have my fun.
But lately I've been doubting,
Just how often I can shoot my "gun"

In every man's life there comes
A time to pick and choose.
Now I'm lookin' for someone, maybe,
That doesn't need that much booze.

I'm wantin' to find me someone
To fuck hard and fast on the couch.
So before you shake your head no,
Lots of friends for me will vouch!

So,
Kiss me like you want it,
It's getting harder to play the game!
Cause if I ain't feelin' that hardness',
You're just another A.F.F. name!


DISCLAIMER HERE: Most of the words are GAP's, I just changed a few key ones here and there......I always told him I was gonna steal his poems one day and make them my own!!

MaggiesWishes 61F

8/31/2006 4:45 am

I enjoyed this little "twist".
Now I gotta go and see "GAP's" version ...

Thanks so much for your "Blog-Footprint" ... that really meant alot.
I'm hoping to be "somewhat" normal here soon ... ya know that "mom" thing has it's moments.

warm huggies 2ya sweet lady


lustcurious42 replies on 8/31/2006 11:04 pm:
Thanks Maggie......I hope to hear great news on your blog in the future

goodatpoetry2 68M
16569 posts
8/31/2006 11:27 am

LOL! I CAN'T stop laughing! I can hardly type! LOL! Wait!

Ok, I'm better now. Kinda. LOL!
Now THERE'S a REAL poem! You SURE got us pegged!
See why I couldn't use that line from a guy's point of view?
Who'd believe it?
Great poem!
You're a NUT! LOL!


lustcurious42 replies on 8/31/2006 11:06 pm:
I'm glad you liked it. I was worried I might offend you......and I felt funny stealing your stuff and changing a few words but it was calling to me, really it was........
And we have such different styles in our writing, that the only way I could respond was to copy, paste, and change a few words

Passion247000 47F
3195 posts
8/31/2006 10:49 pm

I love it... nice spin from the original....

You are a witty one too....
..can't tell by your looks....


lustcurious42 replies on 9/1/2006 6:09 pm:
Hey now, are you saying Goodatpoetry looks witty and I don't? Geesh, you need a spankin' too!!

warmandsexy52 65M
13164 posts
9/2/2006 10:06 am

I was going to give you grief for taking off my good friend GAP, but you've done it sooo well all I can give you is kudos.

warm xx


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