A Moment That Lingers  

looken4sumfun2 55M
149 posts
7/13/2005 9:36 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

A Moment That Lingers


Turning the corner
you suddenly appear,
the moment becomes frozen in time.

Your eyes evaporate the space
between us, as I become
entangled by your stare.

My chest expanding,
heart racing, yet
unable to control my thoughts.

We continue on our
predetermined paths, allowing
our hands to brush each other as we pass.

The reality of the moment
gently fades into the past,
though, your presence lingers with me.

pussnboots694 74M/79F

7/17/2005 5:09 pm

Captivated by your eyes..
Your hunger surges through me
Your gentle brush aginst my hand ..
Ignites my desire
Like the wind I am swept away
Your soft echo fills the air...

Beautiful....


__Huntress__ 56M/58F

7/25/2005 9:03 pm

You've painted an incredible visual ... "your eyes evaporate the space between us" ... is one of the most powerful lines I think I have read on here ... absolutely breathtaking ... !


GoddessOfTheDawn 106F
11240 posts
7/25/2005 10:20 pm

Thank you, this is beautiful

and more...


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