Crucible of Memory  

intierzha 45M
311 posts
4/15/2006 10:33 pm

Last Read:
11/15/2006 7:42 pm

Crucible of Memory

Again, I thought about writing something poignant instead of showcasing my older poems, but I am simply too tired and have a lot to do tomorrow. Hope everyone has a Happy Easter.

'Crucible of Memory'

Night falls harshly on our lives,
Memories of the sun warm upon our face
So dim in this chilling landscape,
A darkening form languishing, haunted
By an image... so sweet
Yet long forgotten,
Words frozen in the crucible of time.

Future's days slip away in shadow,
Twilight distorting all we have known
So far from fantastic hopes and dreams,
A moroseful heart suffering, distraught
By a love... so incredible
Though fading into sorrow,
Words occluded in the fragments of time.

Tomorrow dawns warmly within our soul,
The sun once again warm upon our face
So amazing to sense what was lost,
A welcome reminder returning, fueled
By a memory... so true
No longer forgotten,
Words emerging beyond the edge of time.


warmandsexy52 65M
13164 posts
4/15/2006 11:13 pm

I like the power of the imagery. Poignant and touching. Thank you for sharing

intierzha replies on 4/16/2006 12:37 am:
Thanks for stopping by and thank you for reading.



4/15/2006 11:53 pm

Very nice...thanks

just a squirrel trying to get a nut

intierzha replies on 4/16/2006 12:41 am:
Thank you and thanks for stopping in. Appreciate the comments


meresu 57F

4/16/2006 3:26 am

really thought provoking TY

intierzha replies on 4/16/2006 5:51 pm:
Thank you for reading and thanks for stopping by


angelofmercy5 60F
17881 posts
4/16/2006 5:25 am

That was beautiful. Thanks for sharing it.

intierzha replies on 4/16/2006 5:52 pm:
You are quite welcome. Thanks for reading.


rm_PurryKitty2 49M/51F
9753 posts
4/16/2006 5:34 am

Beautiful!!! Happy Easter!!

Purry {=}


intierzha replies on 4/16/2006 5:52 pm:
And to you as well... Had a nice easter, actually and thanks for stopping by.


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