UNFLOWER  

interested13563 54M
985 posts
3/31/2006 2:49 pm

Last Read:
5/9/2006 4:05 pm

UNFLOWER


I love the scar upon your breast
through which I feel the pain of your soul.
I love the line beside your lips
austere beyond the wisdom of the owl.
I love your suffering of many a year
through sorrow and solitude
it brings us close.
I love the time that passed on you, dear,
blooming with passion, kind, and beautiful,
thorn of a rose.


Copyright 2006 by interested13563


rm_Kissmystuff 62F
1435 posts
3/31/2006 5:15 pm

Lovely...

and deeply sensitive to the beauty that comes to a woman with the passing of her well earned years.

You are a man to be treasured!

kiss

Kiss


interested13563 replies on 4/1/2006 2:55 pm:
Thank you kiss! Your comment touched me very much!

MOfunNOWWOW 56F

3/31/2006 10:09 pm

That is so utterly beautiful and so are you. How lovely to be treasured by you.


MOMO
just a squirrel trying to get a nut


interested13563 replies on 4/1/2006 2:57 pm:
Thank you so much! You made me feel encouraged!

__Huntress__ 56M/58F

4/1/2006 5:14 am

Love has surely blessed her ... as she is so blessedly loved by you ...

{=}


interested13563 replies on 4/1/2006 2:58 pm:
Albeit that was a long time ago. Love needs more than itself
to live long.

_CoffeeNoCream_ 53F

4/3/2006 12:31 am

Thank you for sharing

liefs C


interested13563 replies on 4/3/2006 4:21 pm:
And thanks for reading!

interested13563 replies on 4/3/2006 4:21 pm:
And thanks for reading!

GoddessOfTheDawn 106F
11240 posts
4/3/2006 11:18 am


thx 4 sharing

and my apologiez for my absence lately, things have been a bit hectic to say the least


interested13563 replies on 4/3/2006 4:22 pm:
No problem. I am always happy to "see" you here.

rm_meow344 106F
2615 posts
4/3/2006 9:04 pm

I love this..Hands together simple nod..A man who ebraces all that one is.. Even what others see as flaws..Wisdom and light..Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece..


interested13563 replies on 4/3/2006 10:03 pm:
Thank you miss meow!!!!

rm_meow344 106F
2615 posts
4/4/2006 8:52 am

I have went into your pages to find this.. I hope you do not mind me posting it in the commet box..

To the old poet Theophilos
the young poet Archilochos
addressed this inquiry:
"Master, what should I do
to achieve your greatness?"
But Theophilos would not answer.
He looked inside his mind
to touch the unhealing wounds,
his consuming sorrow,
the rare sparks of joyousness
that froze time for a moment
only to thaw it again
into even deeper pain,
the root of his work.
How much did he wish
to be a young, aspiring man.
How much did he desire
not to behold this poetry,
this blind, burning need
that cannot be contained,
the distance to his own self.
"Do not be me", said he finally.
"Go Archilochos, go your way.
But do not be me".

You have written a journey
of life with this piece.It's
as wonderful,I knew it would be
upon you telling me about it.
Thank you..


interested13563 replies on 4/4/2006 4:02 pm:
thank you, meow!!! i appreciate your comments
and your reading my earlier post!

keithcancook 61M
17930 posts
4/4/2006 8:08 pm

I liked this too. It can serve as a paean to all women who have passed the blush of youth.


interested13563 replies on 4/5/2006 12:47 pm:
Thank you keith!!!!

papyrina 52F
21133 posts
4/9/2006 4:16 am

now that dress i could get in too


I'm a

and
i'm here to stay


interested13563 replies on 4/25/2006 9:56 am:
You would look fabulous in that dress!!!!!!

rm_goddess1946 107F
13518 posts
4/22/2006 5:28 pm

how incredibly beautiful..
a lot like you...


Just a little food for thought.............
If you really want to be happy, nobody can stop you...
{=}


interested13563 replies on 4/25/2006 9:55 am:
Really, thank you!

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