interested13563 54M
985 posts
5/9/2006 11:38 am

Last Read:
10/5/2006 4:06 pm


She tried to hold on to the wall.
She stuck her nails in the plaster
leaving ten scratches behind,
full of belated hope and blood.
Then she collapsed to the floor.
Her teeth were unable to hold the existence
that found liberty.
She had arrived at the end.
She had brought the end.
Pain froze on her face -
and a motionless night
wove an invisible wreath on her hair.
Her eyes, overwhelmed by the beauty
of this peace, looked like
they were trying to part the darkness.
It was very cold; so cold that
the body merged with the floor and the walls
and became one with the stone.
She had given witness to this earth.
She had passed.
Respect her silence.


This is dedicated to someone who
no-longer is. That someone has
been present in almost everyone's
life. It is certainly bold to post
it here but hopefully it will be


Copyright 2006 by interested13563

papyrina 52F
21133 posts
5/9/2006 12:34 pm

i haven't a clue what that was about sorry

I'm a

i'm here to stay

interested13563 replies on 5/9/2006 3:06 pm:
Papy mou, there is a movie with the same title.
It is worth watching, I think.

rm_Kissmystuff 62F
1435 posts
5/9/2006 9:55 pm

The only thing I can connect this to is "They Shoot Horses Don't They"
movie about the dance marathons they held during the depression. People trying to survive. Suicides were common.



interested13563 replies on 5/10/2006 3:17 pm:
Indeed this is the connection!

rm_meow344 106F
2615 posts
5/9/2006 10:25 pm

Movement of passing from
1 momenet of life to the next.
Sometimes in a second as a old
way of life dies a mornful yet
quiet death.Thank you for this,
it has hit so may levels for me.
Leaving my mind to spin.
Hope you are well Kindest Sir

interested13563 replies on 5/10/2006 3:18 pm:
Thank you my Meow!!!!

rm_meow344 106F
2615 posts
5/10/2006 8:00 am

:-typo left for you
Kind Sir..And a smile

GoddessOfTheDawn 106F
11240 posts
5/10/2006 9:42 am


and a ~hug~ for you

interested13563 replies on 5/10/2006 3:19 pm:
Thanks for reading and the hug!
I think we understand what we mean.

__Huntress__ 56M/58F

5/11/2006 3:46 pm

It is so good to come back and read the beauty in you !


interested13563 replies on 5/11/2006 7:02 pm:
Thank you for coming back Huntress!!!!

rm_FreeLove999 47F
16127 posts
5/12/2006 1:35 am

this is so vivid. i haven't seen the movie yet, but i saw a student production of the play when i was at university ... i think it was one of the best student productions i ever saw...

[blog freelove999]

interested13563 replies on 5/12/2006 1:04 pm:
That story is indeed very powerful. Its conclusion, though,
is much more general and this is waht I was trying to write
about: how people are soetimes pushed to self-destruction
when they do not want to fit in. Being sensitive is a
dangerous way of living.

QuiteAGoodHandle 52M

5/15/2006 4:10 am


I just want to say hello to Asianlady4love .....

Looking forward to reading your own blog again.


_CoffeeNoCream_ 53F

5/17/2006 2:43 am

I will check out the movie

liefs C

interested13563 replies on 5/18/2006 1:00 pm:
Thanks for visiting Coffee!!!
(you are the funniest lady in

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