HE RIDES  

interested13563 54M
985 posts
7/30/2006 4:21 pm

Last Read:
8/28/2006 11:15 am

HE RIDES


Broken window open,
A man whistling for a horse
A heart in love too early,
A masterpiece of conjecture.
Orchestral journal written
On blank pages that
Take courage to read.
It takes a strong assumption
To live or leave.
Shattered glass like a dream
Light years in love
So close you cannot feel.
A circular dance of lost
Memories surrounding
A deep well, invisible
To the ears and touch.
He rides the horse away.


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I do not understand what I am
writing here. Can you help?

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copyright 2006 by interested13563


rm_meow344 106F
2615 posts
7/31/2006 11:10 pm

Shattered glass...
The sounds of a ending,
but the ending to what...
Love,Hope,Or ones sight
of what was that is no longer.
You have a poem within a
poem...Profound in scattered
memories...


interested13563 replies on 8/4/2006 2:43 pm:
Deep down we are all trying to hope
even though hope is a constraint on
freedom. I appreciate your imput
very much and really thank you for
that. In an intrerpretation one
can see aspects not previously
thought of. I hope you are fine and
happy, my Meow!

rm_FreeLove999 47F
16127 posts
8/1/2006 1:17 am

sorry can't help. it feels a little to me like a person standing where they always stood, but with the mind moving ever further away, unreachable.



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LustyTaurus 49M
21253 posts
8/2/2006 11:11 pm

This feels like a mid life crisis...a man not entirely happy with the past but not knowing what he wants from the future. Perhaps looking for a clean slate and a fresh start.

That's what I feel from the words you've collected together.


interested13563 replies on 8/4/2006 2:36 pm:
This is a possible interpretation. Personally I have
no mid-life crisis simply because I have a whole-life
crisis since birth! Thanks so much for your input!

rm_FreeLove999 47F
16127 posts
8/3/2006 1:18 pm

dunno when you are gonna be home in your blog again, but i hope you make it in time to attend A baby blog party as i'd love to see you there!



[blog freelove999]


interested13563 replies on 8/4/2006 2:35 pm:
Hi Free! Thanks for stopping by. I have been very busy and still am
but I will try to attend the baby party!!!!!

papyrina 52F
21133 posts
8/6/2006 8:29 am

nope,you know me and poetry


I'm a

and
i'm here to stay


interested13563 replies on 8/6/2006 11:57 am:
Thanks for visiting anyway. Guess where I
am going to go in two days?????

__Huntress__ 56M/58F

8/28/2006 4:04 am

Nope, I do this kind of thing all the time ... the words flow, I have no idea where they're coming from, dash across the screen as stranger to me ...

Fearing love, fearing his loss of freedom, he leaves ...

{=}


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