Sunrise of My Mind  

ilsuconu 58M
194 posts
6/9/2006 11:48 am

Last Read:
6/28/2006 7:07 am

Sunrise of My Mind

When day is done
darkness becomes
my escape from those things that bind.
When dreams replace
my wakeful space
I seek the Sunrise of my mind.

I crave its heat;
that warmth so sweet --
a wonderful, refreshing find.
It soothes my soul
and makes me whole --
that blessed Sunrise of my mind.

Its light inspires
my deep desires
and causes my spirit to shine.
It illuminates
my sense of fate --
that glowing Sunrise of my mind.

But dreams don’t stay
when I awake;
yet still, I’ll seek that hidden sign.
I’ll take the chance
and ponder, perhaps…
… are you the Sunrise in my mind?

Jeeze! Where's all this mushy stuff coming from?!?

Whispersoftly5 53F
15176 posts
6/9/2006 8:01 pm

Absolutely lovely!!!


ilsuconu replies on 6/10/2006 3:13 am:
Seems I'm a poet who didn't know it!

rm_shannee2006 53F
3355 posts
6/9/2006 10:50 pm

Evocative. I love it. I hope there's more where that came from.

Yup...this juiciness is from me....


ilsuconu replies on 6/10/2006 3:15 am:
Sometimes this kind of stuff just comes to me out of the blue... no real thought behind it; that is, the words just seem to fall together on their own.

rm_shannee2006 53F
3355 posts
6/10/2006 7:37 pm

I sometimes come awake at night or after a special spiritual experience with something written completely. It's a true gift when that happens.

Yup...this juiciness is from me....


ilsuconu replies on 6/11/2006 3:27 am:
Yes! That's what I was trying to say... that's how this one happened!

newtothis702207 57F

6/26/2006 3:18 pm

Nice. Very nice.

I look forward to reading more.


ilsuconu replies on 6/26/2006 5:17 pm:
Suddenly, I look forward to writing more... much more!

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