Water fall  

eriedragon4 58M
2737 posts
6/8/2006 11:19 pm

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6/10/2006 2:03 pm

Water fall

Every morning she opens her eyes, he's sleeping sweet as a lullaby
looks so tender in dawn's soft light
She's showered made and leaving him, by the time blue eyes are open wide
He's missed another chance to hear those words

Over and over and over again nothing ever changes
things always remain the same

When the day is drawn to a close, when the candle light is soft and dim
He pulls her close to him
He tells her he loves her, she's his everything waiting every moment
hoping she will say it, only she sobs and crashes deep inside

Over and over and over again nothing ever changes
things always remain the same

Like a waterfall, she's pouring out her soul
saying she never knew enough love like this from those she misses
But darling don't you love me, can't you say you love me
I need to hear, need you to say you love me

Over and over and over again nothing ever changes
even though he loves her so
She's like a waterfall, she's pouring out her heart
saying she never grew up expressing emotions this way
can't you say you love me, I need to have you love me





Whispersoftly5 53F
15176 posts
6/9/2006 9:40 pm

I love "loyal dragon" - I think it's rather powerful and sexy. But I don't like how you got the name. I've been the loyal friend that way before - it hurts - despite the sex part. Kisses and hugs to you sweetie. Whisper...


eriedragon4 58M
1076 posts
6/9/2006 8:38 pm

    Quoting Whispersoftly5:
    "But darling don't you love me, can't you say you love me
    I need to hear, need you to say you love me"

    What's amazing to me is somebody can be so demonstrative of love physically and in actions that there really is or should be no question love is there. Yet all of that is not enough - the words are needed too. A relationship can be very happy, but without those words it is imcomplete. At least that's the way it is for me.

    Great poem. As always, very lovely.

    Whisper...
When writing this piece I was thinking of a girl I once knew,
who would come cring to me every time she broke up with someone,
hop in bed with me, and then in the morning it was like, "ok your the best friend I ever had" . FRIEND, take her shower and leave.
Sometimes before I was even awake,I told her I was in love but for some reason the sex was good but I wasn't good enough to be more than just a friend. but I remained, her friend for quite awhile ,because, after all the sex was damm good, dispite, the water falls
hence my name loyal dragon, (loyal while she's dragging my heart along)
Kisses
your loyal dragon


spliffj6 70M
1 post
6/9/2006 6:44 pm

you are beautiful the falls are nothing compare to your beauty


Whispersoftly5 53F
15176 posts
6/9/2006 6:39 am

"But darling don't you love me, can't you say you love me
I need to hear, need you to say you love me"

What's amazing to me is somebody can be so demonstrative of love physically and in actions that there really is or should be no question love is there. Yet all of that is not enough - the words are needed too. A relationship can be very happy, but without those words it is imcomplete. At least that's the way it is for me.

Great poem. As always, very lovely.

Whisper...


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