Back in black bbw  

eriedragon4 58M
2737 posts
6/4/2006 1:02 am

Last Read:
6/5/2006 10:33 pm

Back in black bbw


So here she is
In black
Because Black slims
And The magazines
Say not Slim
Is not sexy
And not sexy
Is bad

But
They are wrong

In the twilight
I disrobe
My Reubenesque
Beauty

Vague shadows
Sultry silhouettes
Outline
A body seldom seen
By man or woman

Her own eyes
Seldom gaze
and reflections
Are
Ignored

But I revel
In
Magnificence

Dusk darkens
And like
A blind man
I braille my
Way around her body

Fingers trail over her face
Neck
Breasts
Hips
Thighs
Buttocks
Reading suppressed sexuality
In every
Contour

She shivers
We move to the bed
And my naked
Amazon
Climbs in

I lay next to her
Lifting pendulous breasts
To my mouth
Kissing and biting
Nipples grow on my tongue
Hard and harder

I part her soft thighs
And my fingers
Read a new chapter
Of liquid bubbles
heat
And
Passion

I begin to kiss
My slow way down
Lips and tongue
Following fingers
Trying to make sure
Each precious inch is loved

As I near her being
She attempts to stop me
But my persuasive tongue
Tells her it will be okay
With not a word spoken

And I continue my travail

Moments later
With the heady aroma
Of
Musk
In my nostrils
I surface

We kiss
She tastes where I
Have
Tasted her
And she moans

A deep primal
Moan
Of an animal in pain
Or heat
Or both

I flick on
The lamp
She cowers
Afraid
Of what would be said

Gently now
I remove the sheet
And she can see
From my face
That she has nothing
To
Fear

I resume
My journey
In technicolor Splendour

Eyes drinking in
Each fold
And
Crevice
Tongue follows
The scar
Newly discovered
On her midriff

As my lips meet hers
And my tongue parts the hair
I look up
And see the rapture
And the acceptance

Later
She rides me
Astride me
Breasts swinging free
I caress her hips
Belly
Breasts

And she comes

Loving With The Light On





LSUN 61F

6/5/2006 1:18 pm

But that's the true beauty of words
to capture on the bark of white one's true feelings
are usally the ones that touch the deepest


eriedragon4 58M
1076 posts
6/5/2006 12:10 am

    Quoting Whispersoftly5:
    You captured the feeling rather well. Incredibly well. What comfort and liberation there is in knowing one is found to be attractive and desired - even with the lights on.

    This is absolutely lovely.

    Whisper...
Oh yes, I always do it with the lights on er......
or I used to, It's been a loooong time.
thanks for your kind thoughts!
KISSES & HUGS (((()))))


eriedragon4 58M
1076 posts
6/5/2006 12:06 am

    Quoting LadytoPleaseYou:
    now look what you have done......you done went and made me cry.
Don't cry lady,..........
unless it's on my shoulder.
thank you so much
kisses


eriedragon4 58M
1076 posts
6/5/2006 12:03 am

    Quoting moonfire2u:
    Great post...full of kindness, gentleness and sensuality...lovely..dragon

    kind thoughts,
    Moonfire
Thanks babe,I'm so glad you liked it,
kisses


eriedragon4 58M
1076 posts
6/5/2006 12:00 am

    Quoting LSUN:
    This is awesome ty for sharing
    and ty not all of us are Barbie’s
    BBW can be confident and sensual also
Thanks Sun , your so kind, Ithought people would'nt, like this on be cause it was'nt as erotic as some of my others,but it captures my feelings.
I guess as well as others, so glad you liked it!



eriedragon4 58M
1076 posts
6/4/2006 11:54 pm

    Quoting twirly_girl:
    I liked this one too.
    You captured that fear and
    uncertainty in words very well.

thank you so much love, i really did'nt know how,
good this one was, so glad glad you liked it.


eriedragon4 58M
1076 posts
6/4/2006 11:50 pm

    Quoting asalvodetodo:
    Good poetry down to "I braille my / Way around her body." After that, it gets too explicit and concrete. Still, I accept that it's an authentic description and sympathise with your protest against the current culture of skinniness. Thanks.

    asalvodetodo
Thank you for visiting,come back any time.


eriedragon4 58M
1076 posts
6/4/2006 11:49 pm

Thank you my lovely Goddess!


Whispersoftly5 53F
15176 posts
6/4/2006 1:41 pm

You captured the feeling rather well. Incredibly well. What comfort and liberation there is in knowing one is found to be attractive and desired - even with the lights on.

This is absolutely lovely.

Whisper...


LadytoPleaseYou 65F
5447 posts
6/4/2006 12:20 pm

now look what you have done......you done went and made me cry.

PENIS CHARMING....where are you?


moonfire2u 71F
2602 posts
6/4/2006 6:21 am

Great post...full of kindness, gentleness and sensuality...lovely..dragon

kind thoughts,
Moonfire


LSUN 61F

6/4/2006 5:59 am

This is awesome ty for sharing
and ty not all of us are Barbie’s
BBW can be confident and sensual also


twirly_girl 48F

6/4/2006 1:55 am

I liked this one too.
You captured that fear and
uncertainty in words very well.


-Nikki


asalvodetodo 71M
1 post
6/4/2006 1:53 am

Good poetry down to "I braille my / Way around her body." After that, it gets too explicit and concrete. Still, I accept that it's an authentic description and sympathise with your protest against the current culture of skinniness. Thanks.

asalvodetodo


GoddessOfTheDawn 106F
11240 posts
6/4/2006 1:34 am


BEAUTIFUL tribute

wonderful ....


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