Metamorphosis  

curious082385 32F
4230 posts
5/15/2006 1:38 pm

Last Read:
5/22/2006 2:06 am

Metamorphosis


It's me against myself
And I have all that's left to love
In the back of my heart
Balancing on a bony cut
Its fragile and its cold
But it stands here furthermore
Until I fall and tumble to my tomb
Or try so hard to stand up right
Until I drench myself in sweat
These tears - they are the flavor for the day
These screams - they are the lullaby in my dreams
The silence wakes me from my rest

I will not be perfect by tomorrow
The alarm will ring and an imperfection
I will yet be
So give me time
Don't hate me for who I was a day before
Get to know me for today
For I am changing by the hour
I know the signals are small
I know it's hard to tell
But in my heart
I see who I want to be
My brain is working at it
Revelations coming fast

So give me time
I shall lie at least once more
I shall cry a few more times
Until I learn
For it may take me a lifetime
So give me time

Get to know me for today
And once more again tomorrow


rm_saintlianna 46F
15466 posts
5/15/2006 1:51 pm

The only thing I have to say to this is........


curious082385 replies on 5/16/2006 3:54 am:
You know that it is returned
Thank you.

MrNuttz05 50M

5/15/2006 1:55 pm

You are a gift!


curious082385 replies on 5/16/2006 3:55 am:
Hey look!
<--- You are back to being Nuttz again...no more Snoop? lol

Just me...

Seriously_Real 49M

5/15/2006 2:03 pm

You have all the time in the world, baby. Keep walking....we're right there with ya...

--Seriously


curious082385 replies on 5/16/2006 3:56 am:
Walking with me, are you? Did you bring raisins, by any chance?

elysianpleasure 49M

5/15/2006 3:43 pm

Take your time, be whatever you want... the change just part of living.

Nice poem.


curious082385 replies on 5/16/2006 3:57 am:
Life is change...that's what makes it so much fun.
Thank you.

rm_gerson42 53M
2419 posts
5/15/2006 4:03 pm

Beautiful. The poems reflects a strength that you do know who you want to be.


curious082385 replies on 5/16/2006 3:57 am:
I do. I very much know. Enjoying the journey to get there.

seek_u_topia 52M

5/16/2006 12:15 am

Lovely...and everyday we do evolve...what an eloquent message...thanks for sharing


curious082385 replies on 5/16/2006 3:57 am:
You're welcome.

rm_gizbourne 54M

5/16/2006 12:51 am

"merge" by guy h.

sweet darkness
can i trust my self
with what i must face
it makes no difference
what i think i can see
i am blind just the same
it makes no difference
how much i think i know
yesterdays victories
serve only to frustrate
things never are
same as before
the present is here
what will i choose
in life to create
i know without words
it's not just too late
to give up this old grudge
and let go of self hate
bitter sweet darkness
can i trust my self
with what strength
i have left
precious deep night
can i let my self go
to merge with your sight
as much as i want
to fight and resist
i know it is you
i must kiss


curious082385 replies on 5/16/2006 3:58 am:
Haven't seen you around in a while.

tillerbabe 57F

5/16/2006 1:42 am

You are beautiful! Everyday!!!! {=}


curious082385 replies on 5/16/2006 3:58 am:
As are you.
Blushing now....but thank you, sweetie.

GoddessOfTheDawn 106F
11240 posts
5/16/2006 1:55 am

watching you
struggling
learning
emerging
and showing
better than before
admiring you
from afar
smiling
at that
bundle of
inner beauty
hearing you
condemn
yourself
and your
imperfections
so very poignantly
wanting you
to know
that
this is
part of your
perfect beauty
for beauty
is in the
eye of
those
watching
who you become
take all
the time
you need
to grow
even more
we'll b here
sorry to take
up so much space
but somehow
this needed
to find its way
from me to you
we know your
todays
we share your
tomorrows
that is
if you'll let us
tomorrow will
be just that
like today
was
and becomes
another yesterday
as long as your
heart and
mind
can find
a way to
work together
as long as you
can open
yourself
and let us
take away
some of the tears
as long as you
can let us
share
what we
see in you
that keeps us here
the imperfections
will be covered
by the love
and good things
we want for you
our love for you
© copyright
GoddessOfTheDawn
2006

just for you
only for you
because of you


curious082385 replies on 5/16/2006 3:59 am:
Speechless, absolutely speechless.
This was perfect and probably one of the most beautiful and true comments I have ever gotten. Thank you so much.

carebearluv2 43F

5/16/2006 8:44 pm

For you and I...LIVESTRONG DAY (if the link doesn't work, please see my blog)


curious082385 replies on 5/17/2006 2:12 am:
Thank you, care! That's a link that everyone should check out...thanks for passing it along.

bardicman 51M

5/17/2006 12:05 am

simply wonderful.

And as long as there is breath in my lungs you shall never be alone.



I am not dead yet


curious082385 replies on 5/17/2006 2:13 am:
No words...your friendship has meant so much to me these past few monthes. Thank you for being here and never wavering.

concupiscentKid 41M

5/17/2006 6:49 am

Well written and thought-provoking.
You have a distinct voice.


curious082385 replies on 5/18/2006 3:29 am:
*blush*
Thank you...both for the compliment and for the visit.

redlipsprincess
(Princess Lips)
53F

5/19/2006 12:55 am

beautiful...

TTFN


curious082385 replies on 5/22/2006 2:06 am:
Thank you!

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