curious082385 32F
4230 posts
6/23/2006 3:58 am

Last Read:
11/15/2006 1:47 am


He turned to look up the hill to where she stood, tall and alone, silhouetted against the moon.
Just watching.
A soft breeze blew across the ground and he lifted his face to it, imagining for a moment that he could feel her hand gentle against his cheek. Strong and proud she stood on that hilltop, her only movement being the stirring of her hair in the wind. He knew that she could see him looking up at her and wondered what she thought. He could feel the connection between them...trembling so faint and fragile. Words shimmered unspoken in the distance between them.
....so sorry...
....dare you...
....still here...
....friendship still...
...trust me...

He took one step forward, inexplicably pulled.
But he stopped...unsure. Questions, guilt, fear.

She saw that step and for a moment brushed her mind towards his...seeking the slightest touch, a hint of what he felt.
But she pulled back...unsure. Questions, pride, caution.

He looked up again, wishing she would make a move, something, anything.
But she just stood waiting...silently watching.
He shook his head and turned away.

He was too far away to see her hands curled, nails digging into palms and the tears that slid slowly down her cheeks.

marywannado 44F

6/23/2006 5:11 am

WoW, very awesome...

curious082385 replies on 6/23/2006 6:12 am:
Thank you...glad you enjoyed it!

Seriously_Real 49M

6/23/2006 5:45 am

wonderful. outstanding. perfect.


curious082385 replies on 6/23/2006 6:15 am:
Now I'm blushing...

papyrina 52F
21133 posts
6/23/2006 6:02 am

awww hugs honey,wiping your tears awasy

I'm a

i'm here to stay

curious082385 replies on 6/24/2006 2:04 am:

rm_LilBlondeNZ 41F
1028 posts
6/23/2006 6:15 am

Goddamn it, I always want to know what you're writing about!!!! Because it's always good!

I have one shameless plug today, but it's not for me. It just turned Saturday in Auckland, so it's officially my baby's birthday! He just went to bed, but I would love for him to wake up to a bunch of happy birthday wishes from everyone even though I can't be there today.
So if you could join me in saying

Happy Birthday Bulging Boy

I'd so love it!



curious082385 replies on 6/24/2006 2:05 am:
Of course...headed over there immediatly with birthday wishes!

nightstalker172 38M
1258 posts
6/23/2006 8:18 am

hits close to home as always it seems....great stuff as always...

curious082385 replies on 6/24/2006 2:05 am:
Thank you.
Strange how that works, isn't it?

rm_1hotwahine 64F
21091 posts
6/23/2006 9:01 am

And yet again I feel as though two women, in two different phases of life, are living out the same events.

Yeah, I'm still [blog 1hotwahine]

curious082385 replies on 6/24/2006 2:07 am:
I'm getting to the point where that doesn't surprise me anymore...

Choozmi 51M

6/23/2006 10:53 am

I felt something like this last night when I ran into an ex at a restaurant. There was no breeze, though, and the lighting was much brighter.

Good work.

curious082385 replies on 6/24/2006 2:08 am:
Glad that you enjoyed it!

toothysmile 51M
16517 posts
6/23/2006 3:14 pm

so sad. i only know that feeling too well. nothing haunts us like a missed opportunity...
my kisses to you.

curious082385 replies on 6/24/2006 2:09 am:
Pride, anger and fear can be huge roadblocks, can't they?
*sad smile*

micahbiguns 52M

6/23/2006 3:18 pm

moving.. if only..such heartbreak and remorse is felt truly excellent writing

curious082385 replies on 6/24/2006 2:14 am:
Blushing now....thank you...

SirluvsStorms 47M
684 posts
6/23/2006 5:49 pm

To grab a moment in time and glue it to virtual paper with words.

curious082385 replies on 6/24/2006 2:17 am:
Beautiful way to phrase this...

StillSmokin2oo6 45M/44F

6/23/2006 10:37 pm

Damn, now you're gonna make me cry...

Great writing...

curious082385 replies on 6/24/2006 2:18 am:
Awww...didn't mean to make you cry.

But I'm not to worried about it...there is only one sad face and then two with big grins, so I think you're ok.

bulging_boy 50M

6/24/2006 2:15 am

That was grrreat!

curious082385 replies on 6/27/2006 5:45 am:
Do they have Tony the Tiger way over there in NZ??

rm_Oasisgirl11 42F
19 posts
6/24/2006 8:18 pm

WOW, that is Great Stuff! I used to write, loved it in fact, this makes me want to get back into it, but I am not nearly as good as this. Keep writing girl, your great! *HUGS*

curious082385 replies on 6/27/2006 5:47 am:
Thank you.
If you loved to write, you shouldn't stop. It doesn't matter if it is good or bad...write for the enjoyment of it.

rm_lust2u2 52M

6/27/2006 5:22 am

Forgive and forget; great healer both of them, but with different result

curious082385 replies on 6/27/2006 5:48 am:
Yes, very true.

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