Castle's  

rm_cru1972 45M
3520 posts
3/24/2006 10:33 am

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Castle's

Sometimes I feel my heart is like a castle

full of wonder, full of awe.

Sometimes I fear my heart is like a castle

stone, cold, impenatrable.

Sometimes I wish my heart was like a castle

large, jubilent, magical.

Sometimes I want the walls to fall.

Sometimes I hope my heart was like a castle

Strong, defendable.

Sometimes I need my heart to be like a castle

warm, beautiful.

Sometimes I desire my heart to be like a castle

but I can't have it at all


libgemOH 57M/53F

3/24/2006 1:55 pm

Cru, I really like that! -B


rm_cru1972 45M
4407 posts
3/24/2006 3:16 pm

Thank you. I'm so-so bout it, But hey it's been 20+ years since I've written anything.


gypsy1629 42F

3/24/2006 4:51 pm

Very nice words cru, put a smile on my face....0


sweetSinn2690
2943 posts
3/24/2006 5:53 pm

Very nice!


Oh WHATEVER BITCHES!


rm_metalmama69 43F
3878 posts
3/24/2006 6:22 pm

Ok..that's it!! I'm adding you to my watched blog list. I LOVED that!!! Thank you


rm_cru1972 45M
4407 posts
3/24/2006 8:12 pm

Thanks mzhuny I just feel like I'm not good enuff to put this stuff up here, there are so many better writers than me, and I have always been leary to let people read my stuff. Know what I mean Vern?


rm_cru1972 45M
4407 posts
3/24/2006 9:18 pm

    Quoting gypsy1629:
    Very nice words cru, put a smile on my face....0
Thank you, not much of a smile when I wrote it.


rm_cru1972 45M
4407 posts
3/24/2006 9:20 pm

Thanks Sinn you have given me such great advice and kind words.


rm_cru1972 45M
4407 posts
3/24/2006 9:23 pm

    Quoting rm_metalmama69:
    Ok..that's it!! I'm adding you to my watched blog list. I LOVED that!!! Thank you
Well I don't know how many originals I will come up with for a while, strictly for the fact that it's been so long since I've done it. Thank you for the comment


LustyTaurus 49M
21253 posts
3/24/2006 9:37 pm

I can relate to that Cru...Good Stuff.

lustytaurus


powerbella 44F

3/24/2006 10:28 pm

Absolutely beautiful!!! Keep posting your writings Cru!!!


rm_cru1972 45M
4407 posts
3/24/2006 10:51 pm

    Quoting powerbella:
    Absolutely beautiful!!! Keep posting your writings Cru!!!
With all the compliments I have gotten I am starting to think maybe I'm just being to critical of myself. I've always liked writing @ one time I had a notebook full of stuff. But over the years things get tossed, now I wish I never would have done that. I feel this would have been a good forum to bring it out. Thank you for your words of kindness


rm_cru1972 45M
4407 posts
3/24/2006 11:15 pm

There was one person I had in mind when I wrote this, But after I did I thought about all the people who it could have been written for. You were one I thought of right away. My prayers are still with you and your family. Glad your brother is doing so much better.


HOTNBOTHERED0414 47F

3/24/2006 11:26 pm

Thank You C...


rm_cru1972 45M
4407 posts
3/24/2006 11:46 pm

You are very welcome.


sweetSinn2690
2943 posts
3/25/2006 1:21 am

I hope you don't mind...but I wrote something for you. Just because some of us care. Huggs and just know that we are here! A Father's Son



Oh WHATEVER BITCHES!


rm_cru1972 45M
4407 posts
3/25/2006 2:01 am

Not at all I just went toread it but it was not up yet. After reading a lot of your work I know it will be very beautiful. I can't wait to read it!


HBowt2 60F

3/26/2006 4:35 am

So many things are hearts have to be to protect us....


rm_cru1972 45M
4407 posts
3/26/2006 5:19 am

    Quoting HBowt2:
    So many things are hearts have to be to protect us....
But the most important is; caring


twirly_girl 48F

5/16/2006 8:39 pm

Both of our hearts are castles.
Mine's a sandcastle, I think.

I like yer moat.



-Nikki


rm_cru1972 45M
4407 posts
5/17/2006 2:13 pm

    Quoting twirly_girl:
    Both of our hearts are castles.
    Mine's a sandcastle, I think.

    I like yer moat.


You silly sexyass


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