my minds on you  

chopperguy1972 45M
18 posts
2/25/2006 11:55 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

my minds on you

My minds on you-
As I lay here cold and wet-
Thinking was my choice right-
Or one I will live to regret-
So far from home-
So far from your arms-
Clutching our picture-
And all else I deem as charms-
More cold and rain-
I thought deserts were hot-
Said I would never leave you-
Once again I guess not-
Now I know-
My decision was fare-
To fight for your freedom-
Was how much I care-
Now you go on-
Live your life-
My only regret ‒
Is not making you my wife-
So as they close the lid-
And do not shed a tear-
For I gave my life for people like you-
Could smile and be happy without any fear-
One last wish-
To you whom I’ll miss-
Before the casket closes-
Could you give me my first kiss-
I always said-
I wanted to wait-
Who would have thought-
That at 18 it would be too late-
This is for all-
Who had such control-
Stay safe in my heart-
All you who are still on patrol-
Each memorial day that passes-
I’ll sit and talk to you all-
Let them think im crazy-
For talking to this wall-

chopperguy1972 45M
4 posts
2/26/2006 1:14 am

thank you very much, im bummed i cant find the 3rd one i wrote, it is by far the best..but again thank you mamm

2forone64 50M/53F

2/26/2006 6:32 pm

Semper Fi Marine........

bustydevil72 45F

2/27/2006 8:26 am

wow i love ur writings.. they all touched me so... ur an amazing man .. wish u all the best kisses shawna

chopperguy1972 45M
4 posts
2/27/2006 12:44 pm

you all are too kind, thank you. theres a much better one to our armed forces, but cant find it yet

racefan35 54F

3/1/2006 7:45 pm

Chopper you can really write. That touched me so much. I'm without many words right now.

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