Indirect Speech  

chocolatcreme 105F
1004 posts
2/5/2006 10:28 am

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11/26/2010 9:41 pm

Indirect Speech

Comb my hare
Touch my sold
Meet my soulmake
Purify our sings
Found your heartbead
Elements of surprice
Feels like afashion
Bloom the luff
Banish our fieldings
Backs turn coal
You still ker
I adore yew

chocolatcreme 105F
766 posts
2/10/2006 10:56 am

This prose is expressed with homonyms's homophones.
I am glad you take the time to find out more
and delighted that the first impression lead
to you creating an interesting expression.


rm_sharksnsails 47M
738 posts
2/9/2006 5:49 pm

yeah, I have been thinking of deleting the back half of swill for some time, i think I will now on your suggestion,
Admittedly I was pissed at you for what I felt was going after innocent foriegn ppl who lack a command of our language, but the misunderstanding was my own fault, I took you out of context because I didn't take the time to learn you (read more of your blog). Embarassed, my bad.
anyway, be well

Quietly I sit pondering the depths of my ignorances.
Loudly I hear drops from the clouds above,
they land in puddles and echo through the vast chamber of my soul.

chocolatcreme 105F
766 posts
2/7/2006 5:20 am

Wen Chang
You are doing fine, replying the way you do.

Backs turn coal <--- Backs turn cold
You still ker <--- you still care

No worries about offending anyone here. This blog is for expressing thoughts or personification of forms. Reviews helps me to stay in view of changes; understand how the world moves.

Outputs for input and evaluation. Like looking into a mirror and you see your reflection and noted it will be distorted by the glass medium to a certain degree. It is us who decide whether the view pleases or not.

By the way, love your [blog sharksnsails] ... ink spills at the last few sentences. Ah..... your very special own splashes on your the emotional canvas.

rm_sharksnsails 47M
738 posts
2/6/2006 11:53 pm

ok, i read more of your blog, your english is exceptional, i am sure you can handles these knuckledraggers yourself.
my bad
ill catch you around,


rm_sharksnsails 47M
738 posts
2/6/2006 10:11 pm

a beautiful poem.
my I make a humble offering m'lady?
because I like the voice of the work....

Comb my hare (Comb my hair) (I combed her hair)
Touch my sold (Touch my soul) (she touched my soul)
Meet my soulmake (Meet my soulmate) (Our souls in harmony)
Purify our sings (Purify our song) (in pure tunes we sang)
Found your heartbead (found your heartbeat) (my pulse racing)
Elements of surprice (elements of surprise) (mysterious elements)
Feels like afashion (feels like a fashion) (she wore them well)
Bloom the luff (blooms the love) (our rising love)
Banish our fieldings (banish our feelings) (eclipsed our fear)
Backs turn coal <--- I want to know, please explain further
You still ker <--- again, I want to know,
I adore yew (I adore you)

I hope that I didn't offend, I really want to know what the two lines before the last meant, sorry to have to ask...
now I offer one more, for you

Come, Stay
(by sharksnsails)

Come join the poets who inhabit this blogland.
and fear nor regret this one poets hand,
for he seeks to lead you to a circle of friends,
who speak from the heart, words arent the ends.
Words are the means, they are the vessel that carries,
stories of love of adventure of fairys.
Even if you mispell a word or misplace a dot...
these people tease what they haven't got...
you are a light for the world,
be with us poets, I implore you to come
and from these knuckledraggers pull away.
and in our verse and meter, rhyme and stay.

we are here for you,

rm_wenchang1966 47M
404 posts
2/6/2006 6:39 pm

Very regret, I can not write poem, can not comunicate using poem with you, but lucky, I can read, really thank you, my Chocolatcreme, love you.

chocolatcreme 105F
766 posts
2/6/2006 7:03 am

Wen Chang - thanks.

Kaff - Yep... sometime we just dun want to go straight to the point. Hinting and denying.

Darkon - You are whore Knee.

rm_Darkon33 49M
534 posts
2/6/2006 1:03 am

Fonder my hard
Pop the cork
Lick my dig
soothe my rot
Moment of pairsion
Plunge even dipper
You call and mourn
The climax is nail
I lift yeo Hup
Boy!! you are real Hay Vee

Kaff69 46M

2/5/2006 9:22 pm

more like mis-spelled speech wor. hehehe

When I'm Good, I'm Very Good; When I'm Bad I'm Better!
[bling 71645] The seduction emanating from a person of uncertain or dissimulated sex is powerful.
Welcome to the Dark Side ♂♀

rm_wenchang1966 47M
404 posts
2/5/2006 5:34 pm

Good,my talent lady.

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