F(r)iction : 4 : Spider on the moon  

chocolatcreme 105F
1004 posts
3/19/2006 11:13 am

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3/22/2006 2:35 am

F(r)iction : 4 : Spider on the moon

Segregation of thoughts is the way to deal with blows. In smaller packages, they become managable, bearable and minimal. Of course so many parcels to wrap, means you also have less time to dwell on anything.

Automation of life, tabulated routines, fitting everything tightly into any space. You see progress but at prices fixed by yourself and many factors.

Maggie was working alot. Peter's needs had become insignificiant. Her actions shows that she no longer put him first in anything.

The only time both got together were playtime with their angel. Those were the only times, both laughed alot.

The spider weaved her net of safety with silk of financial independence. Maggie was building her path to the moon without Peter. If they reach the moon together so be it, if he didn't tagged along, it did not matter as well.

She felt that she had progressively gained her independence over him, or so she thought.

happyladychat 49F
3740 posts
3/21/2006 8:06 pm

Actually I would hope for Peter to suddenly wake up and realise his profound love for Maggie, and thus, they live happily ever after.... Maggie, Peter and their little angle.

Like I mentioned, hope this is only friction, but then too many people are experiencing such in their lifes. It's so sad....

Mood: Thoughtful

Make it your challenge.... turn me ON!!

david05_96794551 47M
390 posts
3/20/2006 11:35 am

we do learn to be stronger and wiser along when we've grown over the ages... just imagine that maggie is in now is just at the cross junction waiting to blast off to the moon with or without peter... though things might have discuss between maggie and peter... what about little angel...? is little angel going to be taught of the facts and factors eventually...? definately, maggie still have her friends and family arounds her that would care for her too... to cross or not to... maggie still have to decides for her own... don't ever leaves little angel behind though...

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