F(r)iction : 1 : The begining at the end.  

chocolatcreme 105F
1004 posts
3/19/2006 9:57 am

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3/22/2006 2:35 am

F(r)iction : 1 : The begining at the end.

The day Peter punched and kicked Maggie, was also the days he killed her and revived her.

She died a broken hearted woman and reborn a survivor who is set to build her own safety net. Not that she chose to be reborn. Death come onto her quickly in the form of invisible blows, carried out by his rage.

Her screams were not projected by her pain but her fear and delirious bewilderments.... shocked that the man she loved was punching and kicking the very spot, where the union of their suppose love was growing.

She couldn't believe her lover, soulmate and husband would unleash frenzy on their unborn child.

happyladychat 49F
3740 posts
3/21/2006 8:01 pm

Fortunately, it is only friction, but feel sad to think that there are such things happening in reality too.

Make it your challenge.... turn me ON!!

lund0069 48M

3/20/2006 5:33 pm

pure madness...the unborn child did not ask to be created. we create it and we make it suffer

__Huntress__ 56M/59F

3/20/2006 3:34 am

You've touched alittle bit of my childhood with this ... my mother lost two babies because of the beatings she endured while pregnant ... very sad !


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