poem #2...  

carmel62764 53F
191 posts
8/28/2006 6:28 pm

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9/2/2006 2:12 am

poem #2...

for those of you who were looking for more poetry from the carmel one, here goes:


red satin bra on the chair
white curtains blowing in the
late night breeze
Isley Brothers playing on the stereo
as i pose for you

coming forward to nuzzle my breasts
you seem to be...excited
wasn't that your wish, baby?
to be in my presence
and grace me with your touches
all over my body

one nip after another
up and down my back
trails of kisses
finding their mark on
warm brown sexy thighs
where do you want it baby
here in the bed?
maybe on the floor like animals
possibly even in the shower

tell me what your wish is
i want to know
i want to make it come true
i can be real for you
if you are real for me

your tongue trails up my thighs
higher and higher
into the void of erotic heaven
i feel your throb moving toward me
i cannot hold myself back
i want to be a part of you
this is my wish

and wishes will always come true
if you make them known...

i hope that you like it--if not, well you need to just refer back to what i said on my 1st poem at the end to know how i feel...

Hydragenias 57F

8/28/2006 7:01 pm

Beautiful Poem! you are very talented!

carmel62764 53F

9/2/2006 2:12 am

    Quoting Hydragenias:
    Beautiful Poem! you are very talented!
thank you for the compliments and welcome to my blog...as i had stated in a previous entry, I started writing poetry back in HS as my way of lashing out at people who were treating me cruel--it's been a number of years since I actively attempted to compose anything! i apologize for not recognizing your comments sooner...two weeks of crazed work has made me a lunatic of sorts and a rather tired one as such!

but your comments are appreciated and recognized just the same...

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