Its Time for some Silence  

bardicman 51M
7540 posts
1/28/2006 2:19 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Its Time for some Silence

I was visiting goddessofthedawn's blog and after reading [post 216045] I was inspired to contemplate and think about silence. Goddess.. this one is for you ~peekz~

Silence, blessed silence
speak to me my friend
shroud me in your peacefulness
my aggressions to expend

speak to me mine enemy
you are my double edged sword
sometimes preying on my mind
sometimes leaving it restored

surround me in your eloquence
slay me with your might
you reverberate off the walls
when loneliness fills the night

soundlessly stalking my sanity
a struggle that never ends
yet only you can soothe me
and tame the demons within




I am not dead yet


oldman1776 79M
3164 posts
1/28/2006 6:31 am

Very nice youn man.


caressmewell 54F

1/28/2006 7:08 am

Very nice


DTduzDallas 51F

1/28/2006 8:04 am

I cherish silence, especially this morning.


rm_hinkawaza 53M
371 posts
1/28/2006 10:28 am


LadytoPleaseYou 65F
5447 posts
1/28/2006 11:40 am

This poem, by far, has touched me the way no other you have written has. I not only understand what you are saying with your words, but I feel your feelings within me. This is an example of my thoughts on universal feeling, where the reader not only understands what the writer is saying but feels it themselves. Maybe others don't see this as a distinction, but I do. Very well done, my friend.

PENIS CHARMING....where are you?


bardicman 51M

1/28/2006 11:55 am

oldman1776 <------ Go there for true literary genius



I am not dead yet


bardicman 51M

1/28/2006 11:59 am

Caress - Thank you, I had a wonderful muse for this piece and it all seemed to talk to me



I am not dead yet


bardicman 51M

1/28/2006 12:00 pm

DT - Silence is golden. Sometimes. Right now it's blessed.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 51M

1/28/2006 12:01 pm

Hinky - music to my ears.



I am not dead yet


rm_Bct2Esi 52M/51F
1375 posts
1/28/2006 12:02 pm

very well done

silence can be bliss, so I am off to play in it with my camera in the snow

*hugs*

hugs, luvs and smiles


Sister_Act_4_You 39F/39F

1/28/2006 2:06 pm

Bard? This one? No less than awesome! Bravo!


bardicman 51M

1/28/2006 3:26 pm

Lady - Thankyou m'dear. Slowly I evolve to more of what I would like to become.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 51M

1/28/2006 3:28 pm

Nothing like playing in the snow. except you taking nude shots I guess Bct.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 51M

1/28/2006 3:30 pm

Louisa - Thank you from the bottom of my heart.. And thank you for being there to lend an ear when I got hung up on it.



I am not dead yet


yagottalikit 50F
583 posts
1/28/2006 5:48 pm

Astounding!!!! I think this is your best, yet. At least, that I've seen!

Yagotta get it soft and wet so we can kick/stick it


GoddessOfTheDawn 106F
11240 posts
1/29/2006 11:06 am

~hugz~

and a big thank you for your
earz


FeistySyn 53F

1/29/2006 4:55 pm

Beautiful.

Apparently the depth of depravity here is bottomless... don't you feel right at home?
~~~~~


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