Her true love  

amberabercrombie 38F
11929 posts
4/6/2006 11:52 pm

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5/5/2006 11:16 pm

Her true love

A whispering wind sweeps across the weeping

Her little one lay softly on her mothers

A new found love exceeds the two, a bond
which strengthens a love thats new...

Pride glistens down her rosy cheek as she
watches her infant so mild and meek...

Star light and dew drops alert the night,
Sunshine at dawn awakens her sight...

Fresh as the daisies, as bright as the
stars, she now knows she could never be far...

From heaven to earth, from below to above,
she is overwhelmed at how much she loves...

So...who is your one and only true love, your hero, that one person that under no circumstances could you ever live without? It doesn't have to be a significant other either!

2943 posts
4/7/2006 12:30 am

My babies..of course. Pretty poem!


intierzha 45M

4/7/2006 1:12 am

First off, I liked the sentiments of the poem, most touching. Yes, very nice as it certainly appeals to the hopeless romantic I am. I really cannot say who but I know when I have nothing more for this world and I have one image to take with me when I move on... it would be the beauty of her soul reflected by the light in her eyes. Thanks for bringing back a lovely memory.


reverend21 50M
1913 posts
4/7/2006 1:43 am

My son is the most important thing to me, there is nobody else in my life. Remind me to send you a pic of him sometime.

4Luven2 42M
42 posts
4/7/2006 1:55 am

Angela Basset......okay, okay, My kids represent one being to me that if I was without one of them a part of my soul would be gone....My wife is up there, too....she is my song...........but I also got to say that I probably would feel pretty bad if I lost a couple of porno stars..................DON'T JUDGE ME.....some nights are really lonely, well in that sense I would hate to lose my left hand as well...............okay, I'll stick with wife and kids.
Mucho Luv

SlowPlayin 51M

4/7/2006 2:19 am

My son.

boydcounty 68M

4/7/2006 5:09 am

If I have to pick only one - it has to be my wife. I would be completely and totally lost without her.
If I can take some leeway with your question - I would add my daughters, my grandchildren, and OF COURSE my mom who just turned 78 last week.


bardicman 51M

4/7/2006 6:26 am

It would have to be my daughter.

I am not dead yet

downinlove2 55M

4/7/2006 7:29 am

LOvE is what you make it
words can be the lathe of heaven
the bringer of doom
On a path you shall find me
a dream about your room
the hall of life is plendor
for you my love
the time
has come to end this madness
you, yes you the one

you have recieved my most likely last poem here is this form on this forum.The 100 has come and gone fo rme.

bye sweetie

Downinlove Beat Poet

muscles4u2have 56M
1645 posts
4/7/2006 9:22 am


Your blog!!

Allsleeky 37F

4/7/2006 9:33 am

It has to be my son!

oldude1946 72M

4/7/2006 1:44 pm

That was very good, I can't even think of any thing smart to say.

aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
4/7/2006 3:09 pm


kelly402005 53F

4/7/2006 3:55 pm

My kids!!!.......

Great poem!

rm_yukonpaul 52M
1120 posts
4/7/2006 8:37 pm

I only have my parents and sisters. I've never had a true love.

JoLeeS 42F

4/8/2006 12:53 am

Hmmm.. Amber... This one I know the answer to...it's a long answer... If I ever had a point where someone said...if you could rewind your life to one point and start over...what would it be to? I would say right up to the point where i was 4 months pregnant and that bastard asked me to marry him... I would have said no and taken off to Dallas and had my baby unbeknownst to him(becuase I told him right after he proposed....I was like...before I say yes or no I need to tell you something... you can take back what ya just asked me and walk away once i tell ya....). He said fine...marry me baby and all.... So I would have rewound time to that point right then... A friend asked me that question and asked why i wouldnt take back the whole time I was with him... It was a simple answer... Becuase I would never have had my son.... He is my light... He IS the reason I don't just give up and cash in my chips every day of my life... Becuase if I gave up he would have to live with his dad... I don't want that for him....ever... I guess this was a really long answer to a simple qestion... Sorry Amber.. I am just really, really emotional and upset tonight...

frangipanigal 46F
10406 posts
4/8/2006 3:33 pm

Little Frangi of course! Can't beleive she is 3 at the end of this month. Where did that time go...

Frangi x

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