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aascrompn 43M
6957 posts
2/23/2006 8:58 am

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Another


You may all laugh... I did. It's what I'm trying to say with doing a horrible job of actually saying it...

What else can I do
To get you
To acknowledge me?

I leave clues
I read you
You play with me…

What is another
Word for fate?
Tell me…

Comments elude you
Do you just avoid
To keep me at bay?

You inspire me
That is fact
I now write poetry?

This rhyme is hard
I’m not nearly
As good as Bard

It’s the message
You should know

Come with me
Through this passage…

~ © M ~ 23 Feb 06

caressmewell 54F

2/23/2006 9:25 am


catseyes23 62F

2/23/2006 9:32 am

Interesting poetry, aascrom. I will have to read more of your blog. You sound interesting.

Cats...


southrnpeach333 51F

2/23/2006 9:40 am

Crompin, not laughing at all. You did a great job. Now that we know what you are capable of we will expect more from you! Really nice.


bardicman 51M

2/23/2006 10:38 am

Aascrompn - I think I know what you are trying to say here. I am flattered, I am blushing, I just don't know if I am worthy of this affection.



I am not dead yet


TabithaElectra79 39F

2/23/2006 10:44 am

You write better than you believe you do...


GoddessOfTheDawn 106F
11240 posts
2/23/2006 10:50 am

very nice

just be you, that's way more important


rm_SusieQ27 47F
2093 posts
2/23/2006 11:02 am

Mmm..who is this elusive female, honey?..{=}{=}{=}

Luv n stuff..Susie.....


fantasylover_05 63M

2/23/2006 11:35 am

aascrompn

I AGREE with the general consensus here....

You do not give yourself enough credit my Friend!!!

I thought it was very nice and your message is clear!!

I do hope she hears you and you are able to connect! I honestly have similar feelings with several crushes here.........


kelly402005 53F

2/23/2006 2:37 pm

You've got it.........
No need for lesson of any sort......

She'll hear ya!
Good luck!


MOfunNOWWOW 56F

2/23/2006 2:49 pm

Especially love the line, Come with me through this passage. Hope she figures it out, I'm rootin for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


MOMO
just a squirrel trying to get a nut


rm_JohnMacLaine 51M
585 posts
2/23/2006 7:27 pm

aas...

from one horrible writer to another, you did a great job, I hope she gets the hint..

John

"I can retain neither respect or affection for a government which has been moving from wrong to wrong in order to defend its own immorality" Mahatma Ghandi


rm_emmie234 53F
608 posts
2/23/2006 7:55 pm

Very nice job. Thw more you write, the more it will flow.Just feel it. DOn't force it. Now, I know, a silly question...Have you thought of the direct aproach with your crush? Just tell her. Carpe diem! No regrets! Good luck!
~E~


rm_mzbitch2u 48F
63 posts
2/23/2006 9:31 pm

if she is keeping u at "bay"...i hope she reads this, realizes its HER youre talking about, and throws u a line and reels u in!!


rm_phoenixRizn 49F

2/23/2006 10:51 pm

"destiny" is another word for "fate", or "pre-ordained"


frangipanigal 46F
10406 posts
2/24/2006 3:59 am

It's that bloody obvious who it is.

What blonde poet do you and half of Blogville have a crush on....easy!!

From your name, loose an A
Take off Cromp just for today.
Loose the N and spin it round
Her initials will then be found!

What prize do I get for guessing correctly?

By the way, no poetry lessons needed, you do fine all by yourself.

Frangi x


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:18 am

back at ya!


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:19 am

    Quoting catseyes23:
    Interesting poetry, aascrom. I will have to read more of your blog. You sound interesting.

    Cats...
Cats, welcome to my blog! Thanks for stopping and commenting. I hope you enjoy it.


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:21 am

    Quoting Wickedwytch69:
    can't be you want to impress - my poetry sucks BIG time LOL xxx
Oh, I'm trying to impress, but I don't think it's working...


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:23 am

    Quoting southrnpeach333:
    Crompin, not laughing at all. You did a great job. Now that we know what you are capable of we will expect more from you! Really nice.
Oh, now your adding to the pressure! I'm going to eventually write some better stuff... *hugs*


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:26 am

SD - He is only a legend... bardicman You should go read his stuff!


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:34 am

    Quoting bardicman:
    Aascrompn - I think I know what you are trying to say here. I am flattered, I am blushing, I just don't know if I am worthy of this affection.
Lol - Oh don't act all shy now! You love it when I write to you.


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:35 am

Tab, thank you very much! Put that banana pic back up!! I love it.


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:37 am

GOTD, Thank you very much! I'm trying to find my own style...


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:38 am

    Quoting rm_SusieQ27:
    Mmm..who is this elusive female, honey?..{=}{=}{=}

    Luv n stuff..Susie.....
I'm not at liberty to disclose that information just yet... Only if she acknowledges me will I say.


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:39 am

    Quoting fantasylover_05:
    aascrompn

    I AGREE with the general consensus here....

    You do not give yourself enough credit my Friend!!!

    I thought it was very nice and your message is clear!!

    I do hope she hears you and you are able to connect! I honestly have similar feelings with several crushes here.........
I have a number of crushes here too, but this one is the biggest I've had in a long, long time.


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:40 am

    Quoting foxtrotter2000:
    you have the knack for poetry,aascrompn....i agree with everyone here....
Thank you very much! That's very sweet of you to say.


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:43 am

    Quoting kelly402005:
    You've got it.........
    No need for lesson of any sort......

    She'll hear ya!
    Good luck!

I've got my fingers (and toes) crossed!


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:44 am

    Quoting MOfunNOWWOW:
    Especially love the line, Come with me through this passage. Hope she figures it out, I'm rootin for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was wondering if that made any sense. I'm glad you liked it too!


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:46 am

    Quoting rm_JohnMacLaine:
    aas...

    from one horrible writer to another, you did a great job, I hope she gets the hint..

    John
heh! Yes, I truly am horrible, but I learn quickly! Thanks for the kudos.


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:48 am

    Quoting rm_emmie234:
    Very nice job. Thw more you write, the more it will flow.Just feel it. DOn't force it. Now, I know, a silly question...Have you thought of the direct aproach with your crush? Just tell her. Carpe diem! No regrets! Good luck!
    ~E~
Thanks for stopping by and commenting! I hope you enjoyed your stay. If not, I can't offer a full refund.

I have thought of it, but I decided that this is a little fun. See, I really am not what she's looking for, but if I can dazzle her w/ my horrible writing, maybe she could overlook certain aspects of her requirements... *sigh*


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:50 am

    Quoting rm_mzbitch2u:
    if she is keeping u at "bay"...i hope she reads this, realizes its HER youre talking about, and throws u a line and reels u in!!


I hope that she realizes it and just doesn't berate me too badly! heh...


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:52 am

    Quoting rm_mineiswetter:
    Lol..I wonder, I wonder? Very nice writing!
    I'm sure she knows who she is.
I'm not too sure she does... We'll have to wait and see, I guess.


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:53 am

    Quoting rm_phoenixRizn:
    "destiny" is another word for "fate", or "pre-ordained"
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment!

Are there any other words?


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/24/2006 10:54 am

    Quoting frangipanigal:
    It's that bloody obvious who it is.

    What blonde poet do you and half of Blogville have a crush on....easy!!

    From your name, loose an A
    Take off Cromp just for today.
    Loose the N and spin it round
    Her initials will then be found!

    What prize do I get for guessing correctly?

    By the way, no poetry lessons needed, you do fine all by yourself.

    Frangi x
Wow... Look at you breaking out the poetry! You seem pretty sure of your selection!


mysteriesofme 45F

2/24/2006 12:39 pm

I second Frangi's guess...


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/25/2006 8:03 am

What leads you to believe that?


warmandsexy52 65M
13164 posts
2/25/2006 2:19 pm

You are a poet!
And just don't know it!

.....yet!

warm


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
2/27/2006 6:45 am

Warm - Yes... I guess...


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