A Final Goodbye  

aascrompn 43M
6957 posts
2/27/2006 3:15 pm

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10/18/2006 5:14 am

A Final Goodbye


I tried to capture your heart
left clues from your blog
acted like you never saw

I can’t continue this plan
You really don’t care
I am just another man

This is the final goodbye
I have given up
Just wanted to say ‒ sigh

You could’ve acknowledged me
Or written me back
I would’ve let my heart bleed…

~ © M ~ 27Feb06

007sexy40plus 52F  
7603 posts
2/27/2006 3:49 pm

A gorgeous smile, how could anyone not want to acknowledge you, you beautiful man? Sorry dear heart!

I think I would have written back just to see that smile.

I am the real deal! "Come Get Me!!!"


bardicman 51M

2/27/2006 4:22 pm

A vicious circle has ended
but soon will begin again
for we are attracted to beauty
or songs by Frank Gershwin
With the ladies and the music
I wish you lots of luck
well moreso with the ladies
cause Gershwin would be a dead fuck.



I am not dead yet


MillsShipsGayly 53M

2/27/2006 4:46 pm

these women can be such teases ....
maybe she will read this and reconsider
good luck


MaggiesWishes 61F

2/27/2006 4:54 pm

ahhhhh sweet darlin'... come here for hugs.
now, don't ya be running off ... you will be sooooo missed here!


angelofmercy5 60F
17881 posts
2/27/2006 5:04 pm

This was well written, but sad. And probably reflects the sentiment of a lot of people on here. Thanks for sharing aascrompn.


kelly402005 53F

2/27/2006 5:08 pm

Aaahhhhhhh.....
~hugs~


Allsleeky 37F

2/27/2006 5:32 pm

Hey baby, you did captured my heart.

**You are not leaving are you?**
Don't give up.

Hugs


rm_ruredyforme2 54M
2 posts
2/27/2006 5:34 pm

get on with yur fuckin life and quit crying in your soup. Bea man for christ sake there are only twenty million more out there!!!!


Goldenhairgodess 64F
396 posts
2/27/2006 5:54 pm

I liked this-many times I have felt the same about some that I have met-just once-never to see them or hear from them again. What will be-will be.


saddletrampsk 55F

2/27/2006 6:13 pm

sorry for your pain sweety..


fantasylover_05 63M

2/27/2006 6:29 pm

I do know how you feel my Friend!!

*puts arm around shoulders*.... lets go have a drink!!


frangipanigal 46F
10406 posts
2/27/2006 6:40 pm

Onwards and upwards my friend!!

Frangi x


jadedbabe78 107F

2/27/2006 9:20 pm

Hugs to you ~ Jadey


sassybelle21 34F  
13313 posts
2/28/2006 3:19 am

Aww you can write to me and I will write back to you


Babel__Fish 46F

2/28/2006 7:21 am

It is her loss in my eyes

Babel


rm_mzbitch2u 48F
63 posts
2/28/2006 3:12 pm

sorry sweetie, shes obviously blind! chin up and all that sort of thing!


clevergirl4U 59F

2/28/2006 3:59 pm

To be vulnerable, put ourselves "out there", and risk being seen the fool, all the while knowing knowing that someone just might cut their teeth on our heart, is what makes the difference between those who find great love, and those who don't. Keep the faith


Plano69 55M

3/1/2006 10:55 am

(I hardly know you so sorry to impose but...)
One thing I've learned from my mistakes... (and boy, there are many! LOL! )...
Is that if you really REALLY like someone...
don't play games or leave clues...
Tell them point blank!
"I really LIKE you! " OR
"I'm in love with you!"
Now if they still don't get it, then well....
I know it hurts but at least you know...
But leaving poetic clues... I've made the same mistake and it's gone way wrong in BOTH directions...
People who just happened to inspire me were thinking I was madly in love with them
and the ones I really liked thought I was just being creative... LOL!
We're all here for various reasons but I'm learning to not take it too seriously... Love is fickle and can change in an instant...
Don't give up! Sometimes we just need a break...


aascrompn 43M
6444 posts
3/2/2006 5:18 am

    Quoting Plano69:
    (I hardly know you so sorry to impose but...)
    One thing I've learned from my mistakes... (and boy, there are many! LOL! )...
    Is that if you really REALLY like someone...
    don't play games or leave clues...
    Tell them point blank!
    "I really LIKE you! " OR
    "I'm in love with you!"
    Now if they still don't get it, then well....
    I know it hurts but at least you know...
    But leaving poetic clues... I've made the same mistake and it's gone way wrong in BOTH directions...
    People who just happened to inspire me were thinking I was madly in love with them
    and the ones I really liked thought I was just being creative... LOL!
    We're all here for various reasons but I'm learning to not take it too seriously... Love is fickle and can change in an instant...
    Don't give up! Sometimes we just need a break...
Plano - I usually don't play games... It started out as a fun thing to do just to see if I could get her attention. I usually make things well known, however, I wanted to see if my crapy poetry could relay the same message. This time, I got very lucky. She knows my intentions and isn't interested, but at least she finally understands. I will take the direct approach from this moment forward. I'm trying very hard not to take things too seriously, it just gets tough at the end of the day when you want somebody to curl up w/, ya know?

Thank you very much for taking the time to stop by and comment. I've heard great things about you blog and have not taken any time to check it out. I'll have to get over there soon.


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