_CoffeeNoCream_ 53F
6527 posts
10/25/2005 11:24 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm


She entices and she knows.
Spreading her legs ever so slightly.
leaving the promise of suggestion.

The dawn scintillates in
on the mirror from outside.
A ray of light flaunts itself proudly
across her shoulders,
basking in her splendour.

She casts a smile
from over her delicate shoulder
and winks at the camera.
Knowing that her temptation
is etched in his memory

Ever so slowly she rolls over,
her arms stretching above her head,
her treasures proudly displayed.

The image is taken,
the memory solidified
before all else drifts slowly away.

Liefs Coffee

tillerbabe 57F

10/25/2005 11:57 pm

WOW..this is my first time here....I'm so glad I came!

Gorgeous..."Exposure" {=}

warmandsexy52 65M
13164 posts
10/26/2005 5:45 am

Nice poem, cafe noire. Lovely imagery. ~warm

Erik_Bloodaxe 57M

10/26/2005 6:44 am

Nice. This moved me.

janmecir 54M
158 posts
10/26/2005 8:06 am

I'm being cheeky. I'm sticking a comment in here that should be going in your 'Muppet of the Week' post of a few days ago (you post stuff so fast, you might not read comments made more about 10 minutes ago (!)

So forgive me for climbing into the wrong box....

Daniel Craig v Pierce Brosnan? There's no comparison. Daniel Craig wins hands down (and no, I'm not a member of his family) (or from Liverpool)

Pierce Brosnan only does one kind of acting: sterotypes. Ok, i hear you say...thats perfect... 'James Bond' is All and Only that: a sterotype. What's required is acting that conforms to a formula: suave, sophisticated, silky smooth etc (being critical, I'd amend that to: slimely-smooth) (being even more critical I'd add : Bland) Pierce Brosnan is attractively and vacuously bland. Hardly any difficult emotion will ever flicker across his handsomely chiselled mug....he's about as expressive as a hand glove....

In other words...the perfect 'muppet'...

Daniel Craig will bring some 'character', (and maybe some interesting character flaws) will animate this James Bond muppetry from the inside out.....(if allowed...if given some 'licence to.....not 'kill' or 'thrill' that is....)

End of vent.

Go on - shoot me Coffee (!)....get out your gun.....

By the way.....'Hi'.....i forgot


leyndokona2 50F

10/26/2005 9:53 am

Did you make pics today?

jim5131 56M
1296 posts
10/26/2005 9:49 pm

...very nice.

reminds me of the 'flash' of women's temptations that burn in my memory like a polaroid..and I remember each instant of the moment.

very nice...

redswallow777 49M
6811 posts
10/28/2005 8:57 pm

You made me lust after this poetic image...bravo...

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