Dune  

_CoffeeNoCream_ 54F
6527 posts
1/19/2006 1:39 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Dune

You can't build
upon a dune,
or imagine it is anything more
than a slight advantage
over sealevel.

But I try,
and it crumbles...I fall,
and this is left...

Liefs Coffee


papyrina 52F
21133 posts
1/19/2006 6:01 am

MIX IT WITH WATER AND ALL WILL BE FINE


I'm a

and
i'm here to stay


Chancy4now 42M

1/19/2006 11:09 am

Is this your original? It's fantastic. I have come to expect so little from ameteur poets (including myself) that I am always amazed and delighted to find tidbits of great writing. Count me as a fan.


Erik_Bloodaxe 57M

1/19/2006 1:08 pm

Buy a beach hut


Sulabula 46F
12659 posts
1/19/2006 3:19 pm

it would be a bit dangerous to build on sand dunes

Sula xxx

come visit my blog


Green_Tea_Boy 51M
1064 posts
1/19/2006 4:10 pm

its beautiful Coffee....

but I hope it isn't alluding to you dental work yesterday?


dutchpete 55M
563 posts
1/20/2006 2:05 am

Dunes never stay long.
Wind takes the sand all over the world, placing it some where else
To create new dunes.

Only when the right grass roots or trees have been planted it will last, the dunes.


ByteChaser2 54M

1/20/2006 6:55 am

<-- with papy. Mix in some mortar, gravel... Change the shifting dune into a foundation hard as stone and build a castle.


Viggo57 61M

1/21/2006 2:07 pm

It's the trying
that counts.....
amongst
the crumbling
lies always
more than
with
what was
started.
Loved your poem, Coffee and Cream.

Thanks for the thoughts.I'll be back.


interested13563 54M
2557 posts
1/21/2006 3:21 pm

This is indeed good!


whiskEynowater 56M
204 posts
1/23/2006 1:11 am

foundations in life can be physical and mental...sometimes we get the chance to build on both.


eriedragon4 58M
1076 posts
1/23/2006 5:14 am

where's my coffee ?
everyone knows I'm a beast without my coffee!
come back soon I miss you


rm__AnyGirl_ 52F
246 posts
1/23/2006 2:08 pm

lets go skinny dipping on this beach


HBowt2 60F

1/24/2006 1:44 am

but a dune gets to exist beside the beautiful wild sea.......


boydcounty 68M

1/24/2006 8:23 pm

the dune protects
that that lays behind
climb the dune with me
and lay me behind

-boydcounty-


boydcounty 68M

1/24/2006 8:25 pm

the dune protects
that which lays behind
climb or'e the dune with me
and be protected

-boydcounty-


_TrollyDolly_ 58F
25 posts
1/26/2006 8:26 am

I am sure you have people around you to catch you


rm_Mrs_Mac 56F
66 posts
1/26/2006 9:36 am

this sounds so sad......
you ok ?


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