_CoffeeNoCream_ 54F
6527 posts
3/22/2005 6:59 am

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm


I'm on the sharp edge of wanting,
needing all that he makes me feel.
On the keen pin point of desire,
it's like air to a drowning mermaid,

but I want to drown, then be reborn,
in his tender arms, laying in the hollow
of his soft comfort.
Taken me from zero, up, up,
far beyond
what I've imagined heaven
would be like.

I am a mermaid come to grovel
at the door of Poseidon’s lair
Beg for his black fingers
and soft tongues
to impale me, till I quiver,
raised island, sucked in sea,
suckled by he
who commands the fishes
and wets his shark teeth on my desire

Caught in that blue nether world,
between the rememberance
of him, carrying me wild wanton,
I lay here hypnotized by his magic,
cradled in your ocean of soft blue



Liefs CnC

rm_bella_ 48F
4030 posts
3/22/2005 11:41 am


papyrina 52F
21133 posts
3/22/2005 10:51 pm

you had a better greek mytholgy teacher than me

I'm a

i'm here to stay

GoddessOfTheDawn 106F
11240 posts
3/23/2005 11:16 am


keithcancook 61M
17930 posts
3/26/2005 6:46 am

Your vision of "The Sea of Desire" was was well thought and well written. I also liked the mythological references. Thanks!

rm__AnyGirl_ 52F
246 posts
6/25/2005 10:26 am

Mmmmm this post is wet

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