Knife in My Heart  

VenusDiaries 63M
531 posts
5/4/2006 10:34 am

Last Read:
5/19/2006 8:43 am

Knife in My Heart

I got a knife in
My Heart today
It was the mere
mention of her

Two friends
reminded me
of her
It's difficult to remain

The knife jerked
and wouldn't come
away twist it
turn it it wouldn't
come away
too many reminders
of good love
stripped away

why punish me
this way
doesn't even
know she
punishs me
this way

I'm sick to my stomach
as my heart
burns to blackness
punish me
this way

I need Seaduction
to carry me away
far away to a
new love
in Armstrong
County, PA

Her eyes
This new one
are like the sea
after a storm
blown away
she could take the
knife out
and cure me
of my pain

to sail away
on Seaduction
or the cottage
in the mountains
or to town for sushi

you have to
help me baby
alieviate the pain
sail away on

rm_saintlianna 46F
15466 posts
5/4/2006 2:44 pm

Wow. I didnt know.........

What kind of artist are you?

VenusDiaries replies on 5/4/2006 3:02 pm:
Her eyes are like the sea after a storm blown away.

Printmaking, painting, drawing, photography and sculpture. Got arrested once for performance art but we'll talk about that if you email me. I teach Studio art at a university, so I have a gig to support my bad habits. I was so wishin you lived in ATL. CareessMeWell is suppose to be trying to get in touch with you with important information. No BurgerKing or pawn shops. I thought I was rural.

A message from u helps me during this pain filled day. Oh my dear, how I would hold you through several lifetimes.

VenusDiaries replies on 5/4/2006 4:10 pm:
MFA Printmaking & Painting BFA Printmaking & Sculpture. Trying to survive in the 21st century doing what I love. Looking for someone with similar sensibilities to share those same experiences forever

ArgosPlumyKooky 46F
3902 posts
5/5/2006 7:56 am

seaduction. . . calling always eh. . .torture. . . but beautiful torture it seems. . . good luc. . . .

VenusDiaries replies on 5/5/2006 9:35 am:
An artist is always a torturer soul. But we do make the best lovers.

rm_skyeone2 65M/46F
7186 posts
5/5/2006 8:28 am

Your poetry is absolutely beautiful! The way you express feelings, what can I say but WOW!!! Keep up the good work!

My other half and I also draw and do sculpture. He goes further and does photography and painting as well as a number of other types of art!


Blessed Be

VenusDiaries replies on 5/5/2006 9:42 am:
Thanks for thinking that nmy deepest emotions have some signficance. Keep making art..

woofff 42F

5/7/2006 7:09 am

This post is very poignant to me. It brings back so much that I'm wondering now if I ever left all that stuff behind in the first place....

Am thoughtful......

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