Dark Slumber  

Vampyre_Akasha 39F
38 posts
4/12/2006 10:01 am

Last Read:
10/2/2006 2:59 pm

Dark Slumber


For My sub Lothos

Close your eyes, My little one,
Listen, can you hear Me sing?
I sing, just for you.
My voice carries in the Dark,
To guide you in,
Deeper in...

I have always been here,
Deep in your thoughts.
I dance, a whirl of black.
I move nearer to you.
Come My little one,
Come deeper still...

In the Darkness I reign,
Across death and despair.
I pull you to Me.
Locked in My embrace,
You will fall,
Deeper into the Darkness with Me...

Vampyre_Lothos 34M

4/13/2006 10:16 am

I am gratefully thankful Akasha for your poem

To find myself again, the walls are closing in

~Crawling / Linkin Park


Lukn2know_ 64M
117 posts
4/14/2006 1:08 am

Quite lovely Akasha, I find your narrative compelling, The content is superb, and You have delivered it with power for your age Lukn2know


rm_moonboy23 37M
893 posts
4/17/2006 6:15 am

very nice
like your imagination and the flow of words
It comes so naturally like a natural water fall


SirMounts 104M

4/21/2006 8:05 pm

A very... telling piece, Vampyre_Akasha.
Welcome to the blogs. *smiling*


eclectusuk1 49M/50F
1 post
4/28/2006 8:03 am

Nice words Akasha, no wonder Lestat was smitten

eclectusuk


rm_Helan2 54M

4/30/2006 1:34 pm

Great!Really professional. I enjoyed reading it and Lothos got to be a happy guy


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