Bit of a spurious one this lol  

Ubermik 50M
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5/22/2006 9:50 am

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5/26/2006 3:28 am

Bit of a spurious one this lol

But while in a chat room last night some muppet was writing a series of one line ditties about rain, dont ask why, I couldnt figure it either), so in my general sarcastic piss taking demeanour I asked if it was a one line poetry competition and could anyone enter, expecting him to verbally rip my head off and lead to a fun back and forth I was surprised when he didnt realise I was being sarcastic and said post "one if you can"

Obviously the phrase "if you can" considering the tripe he was posting was a bit too tempting so I spewed out the first thing that sprung to mind to do with rain, a few minutes later as it was dissapearing down the page I actually read it back and thought I quite like that, so I saved it to a text file and here it is

Each softly falling raindrop as it falls so pure and clean,
could tell a million stories of the things that it has seen,
the endless living cycle from the puddle to the cloud,
but they hide the tears on someones face, an equalising shroud

Hardly worth the build up. but I liked it lol so ner

sideline1968 49F

5/25/2006 6:09 pm

I like it as well Mike. Very nice for a spur of the moment rambling.

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