Life After Death...  

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7/7/2006 2:23 am

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7/7/2006 11:22 am

Life After Death...


LIke every stream has it's own current...
My stream flows strong and different...
Also, just as for ever first breath,
there is a last...
My stream no longer flows,
the time for flowing has pasted...
But even though water no longer rolls through my stream...
I can always look forward to the rain...

By:Thomas White

This is some of my finest work. I want to test you on how open minded you are, and on how well I have writen this poem. I want you to analyze it and see see how deep you can go. Just think for a little bit, and try your best. Every line can be analyzed. Plus, the title "Life After Death" can be considered as a hint. When you get the answer, mail it to me. Also tell me whether you like it or not. Just be gentle...

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