One more...just for HIM  

TammyDHU 46F  
972 posts
5/11/2006 3:27 am

Last Read:
5/12/2006 2:31 am

One more...just for HIM

Lost and all alone
I always thought that I could make it on my own
Since you left I hardly make it through the day
My tears get in the way
And I need you back to stay

I wander through the night
And search the world to find
The words to make it right
All I want is just the way it used to be
With you here close to me
I’ve got to make you see

That I’m lost without your love
Life without you isn’t worth the trouble of
I’m as helpless as a ship without a wheel
A touch without a feel
I can’t believe it’s real...

And someday soon I’ll wake
And find my heart won’t have to break

Yes I’m lost without your love
Life without you isn’t worth the trouble of
All I want is just the way it used to be
I need you here with me
Oh darlin’ can’t you see...
If we had love before
We can have it back once more


rm_anacortes 75M
2850 posts
5/11/2006 10:28 am

Good Luck!!


Looking0100 55M

5/12/2006 12:25 am

Wow! Tammy,

That is a beautiful poem. I very rarely read poems (or that used to be true; I am now changing that for AdultFriendFinder). But, your poem here and a previous one clearly show me that you know how to write well and your poetry is splendid.

I would say that of all the poems I have read recently (all at AdultFriendFinder), this poem is by far the best and most clearly understood. I absolutely love this poem and everything in it.

This poem is filled with a longing and sadness that I truly understand. You weep tears for someone that you miss. You are lost.

I can really understand what you mean. I had a girlfriend for about two weeks. It was only an online thing, but I truly loved her and thought that she loved me. Even though I believe now that she was a scammer, I still miss the intimate talks that we had. I miss everything that I thought was real.

Please, keep up the good work! If your poetry is as good as this one and just as clear, then I will very much want to read it, and I will do just that.

Jon C.


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